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A anotherone Active member Joined Feb 1, 2018 Messages 325 May 29, 2019 #2 This flashback is way too long. The whole thing is a succession of tropes, so no need to make it extra long to boot. I'll probably skip reading until his past is finished, since it's highly unlikely to give us anything really interesting.
This flashback is way too long. The whole thing is a succession of tropes, so no need to make it extra long to boot. I'll probably skip reading until his past is finished, since it's highly unlikely to give us anything really interesting.
X XL Dex-chan lover Joined Aug 9, 2018 Messages 2,611 May 29, 2019 #3 That product placement at the end, smooth move Author. 🤣
V Velsy Dex-chan lover Joined Nov 2, 2018 Messages 4,007 Feb 3, 2020 #4 I was at that moment.. the MC pooped his pants.
