Another convenient death. Just once... I'd like to see someone "random good guy citizen" "coming back for revenge" after "Goku destroys their life with a Kamehameha"
"Hurry, Ash! You saved the world again!" Like Ash is causing problems by saving the world. I'd love it if the God of the world just starts talking to him like "I'm trying to write a good story with you, fucker!"
When your ultra-powerful guinea pig loli becomes a failure because you were too busy giving her OP magic circuits and forgot to make sure she wasn't retarded.
Anyone notice that the time zone seems to have changed between chapters? Noire seems to be somewhere after sunset and Ash seems to be somewhere where where the sun is still up.
So you probably just have to kill the guy to deal with the golem? If this wasn't an OP MC story anyway that would be an obvious weakness if he has to give it orders constantly.