Dragon Ball AF (Doujinshi)

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overrated overhyped
i see toyotarou recylced some concepts from this and incorporated it into super
can be surmised as text book villain and his text book evil mom pop down to earth and with the power of superior genes
wipe out the z warriors
due to a seal placed on the big bad the z warriors are bought 1 months worth of time to train and
you guessed it summon goku to bail em out like always
vegeta always first to rush in and accomplish nothing
saiyans jus got a whole lot more OP cuz with 7 the dragon balls can come back through bs witch craft
saiyan is suppsoed to be a form of rage so idk man
all it has are interesting ideas and if that does it for ye you'll like it
 
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This was so freakin’ great! I SO wish it would be finished!

I loved seeing cameos and returns of movie characters! The story fit so seamlessly into the DBZ cannon that it felt like it could be official. It really bridged the gap between Z and GT in a way that made me like GT more.

I really loved the way they explained the mysterious ending of GT. It felt like anything and everything I wanted to see happen in GT happened in this tiny piece of an arc.

I really appreciated the action packed and dramatic tone of this arc too. There were still some great comedic moments to boot! I like this even better than DB Super, based on the little bit we were able to see. It’s such a shame this arc is unfinished!
 
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I just wish this one has proper final fight. Even if fans hate GT for the non canon story, and even if Super Saiyan Blue got its inspiration from this Super Saiyan 5, this manga still have a solid concept. Such a pity.
 
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New chapter just added! Original drafts drawn by toyble have been used by Rogeru to complete this chapter, and some bonus pages recovered from exclusive rare doujinshi magazines have been included too!
Check out the fifth chapter "Super Warriors Assemble", it's a project of DBFM Group. Help us to continue and finish this story with your ideas!
 
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Throwing this out there. Wouldn't it be, different, if power wasn't the end all be all deciding factor for this ending? Instead of it all concluding with the bad guy dying, how about it ends with the bad guy understanding. It would be a nice contrast to the status quo of casual Goku k.o. w's. Its not in his power that he will succeed but his words. I mean Xicor is, teeeeeechnically his son, this all spiiiiraled from a misunderstanding. And maybe Vegeta would get some character development out of this. Like, not in every case is it the power he lacks, but the woooorrrdddss unnnnsaaaiiidd?!?! Spit balling. Maybe after all that Xicor just shocks off and returns after a hundred plus years to assist Goku jr. Xicor's immortal right? Are kai's immortal?
 
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Throwing this out there. Wouldn't it be, different, if power wasn't the end all be all deciding factor for this ending? Instead of it all concluding with the bad guy dying, how about it ends with the bad guy understanding. It would be a nice contrast to the status quo of casual Goku k.o. w's. Its not in his power that he will succeed but his words. I mean Xicor is, teeeeeechnically his son, this all spiiiiraled from a misunderstanding. And maybe Vegeta would get some character development out of this. Like, not in every case is it the power he lacks, but the woooorrrdddss unnnnsaaaiiidd?!?! Spit balling. Maybe after all that Xicor just shocks off and returns after a hundred plus years to assist Goku jr. Xicor's immortal right? Are kai's immortal?
You know, Toyotaro put on hiatus this story forever, but I'm in a project of reviving and continuing it.
You'll know details about it very soon. What I can already tell you about it is that we've put in consideration that Xicor is Son Goku's son in some way, so... stay tuned.
 
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Let’s continue toyble's DBAF together! Your support is essential!

Hey everyone! After completing Volume 5 based on the author’s drafts (read it here https://mangadex.org/chapter/3450c83b-1235-4acb-a7c6-23b35d5c0f2f ), we’ve decided to keep going and continue this incredible journey!

I’m working on DBAF Volume 6, with the screenplay written by me and PGV (@PrinceGASVegeta on X, creator of the DB Budokai AF fan game), and artwork by Rogeru (Dragon Ball EX Apocalypto, continuation of RoF manga, and many more).

How does it work? Rogeru draws a new page every time we reach the $45 donation goal. To give you a preview of the project, the first 8 pages of Volume 6 are already available for free! Check them out here https://www.patreon.com/dbaf

The screenplay for the Xicor story arc is already completed, but to bring it to life, we need your help! All donations go directly to the artist, Rogeru, so he can continue working on the new pages.

If you want to support the project and see new pages as soon as possible, you can donate here:
https://www.paypal.com/donate/?hosted_button_id=KTVB6KHKF6X72

As soon as we reach the goal, the new page will be published immediately for everyone!
A huge thank you to everyone who contributes!
 
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