I'm liking the rough and rugged designs of each character. The general rough aesthetic of the artstyle too for that matter. Page 10 caught my eye with that thing at the center. It kinda looks like a massive four-legged creature. Foreshadowing maybe?
Although, I'm not sure I follow what was going on in the second half with the new characters. It could just be me, but I couldn't draw a connection between them and the mains aside from the eye guy.