Elf to Shuryoushi no Item Koubou - Vol. 3 Ch. 13

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This chapter really shows how bad the author is at drawing emotion. We got a fight with some weirdo fighthorny merc and he's got the same expression I do browsing twitter at 1 AM. And the fight itself is meaningless sword swing, dagger throw, to curb stomp. it's so hollow.
 
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Saying it is a magical ore is a little weird, why not simply say "this dagger is coated in sleeping poison" or something? Or dust or essence of magicplant, a long explanation for something that is irrelevant in the grand scheme of things.
 

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