Erika Won't Back Down - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - Smell of The Game

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Oh wow, surprise chapter, thanks a lot, it reminds me that...I honestly forgot a lot of details and all these names just go by my head, I will have to re-read it, wish I wasnt reading it in a hurry, so I will have to give it a proper look.
Thanks for not making the cliffhanger Erika having heart problems but instead a more comical one with her kick.

typo in page 8, panel left second bubble.
 
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Oh wow, surprise chapter, thanks a lot, it reminds me that...I honestly forgot a lot of details and all these names just go by my head, I will have to re-read it, wish I wasnt reading it in a hurry, so I will have to give it a proper look.
Thanks for not making the cliffhanger Erika having heart problems but instead a more comical one with her kick.

typo in page 8, panel left second bubble.
Ah yeah, i always forgot to make a character page for web uploads. Ngl can't blame you for forgetting names and details, considering the inconsistency of the uploads.

I can't spot the typo tho, can you screenshot it?
 
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i hope you are a guy who makes good endings author.because this? sorry but it screams bad ending.am i too paronoid?SORRY BUT İ CANT FOCUS SİNCE THE GİRL HAVE CANCER AND THE GUY İS LİTERALLY SERİAL KİLLER
I'm currently cooking how to make the ending to not be too much of a bullshit or feel like deus ex machina lol. My favorite anime ending of all time is FMAB, and on the polar opposite is Requiem for The Phantom.
I can understand your paranoia, though!

On another one, my other work is called "gott Ist Tot". It's a R18 paid only doujinshi, though.
https://x.com/sakiyume11/status/1999102517964329408?s=20 WARNING R18
 
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Ah yeah, i always forgot to make a character page for web uploads. Ngl can't blame you for forgetting names and details, considering the inconsistency of the uploads.

I can't spot the typo tho, can you screenshot it?
"BUT I SUGGEST YOU INVESITGATE" The typo is in INVESITGATE instead of INVESTIGATE

Also...wait a second, page 22, is that PAPYRUS?
 
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"BUT I SUGGEST YOU INVESITGATE" The typo is in INVESITGATE instead of INVESTIGATE

Also...wait a second, page 22, is that PAPYRUS
awh man..
i thought you meant undertale papyrus :(
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I'm currently cooking how to make the ending to not be too much of a bullshit or feel like deus ex machina lol. My favorite anime ending of all time is FMAB, and on the polar opposite is Requiem for The Phantom.
I can understand your paranoia, though!

On another one, my other work is called "gott Ist Tot". It's a R18 paid only doujinshi, though.
https://x.com/sakiyume11/status/1999102517964329408?s=20 WARNING R18
not to make a pressure author but just for you knowing i will definitely depressed for a month if one of them dies:( anyway keep up the good word i support you
 
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