Ero Mangaka Onee-san to Otsukare Ryman

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Usually the short story doesn't end well, but this one is just too solid. Well still a little bit unsettled between, spoiler:

The female colleague doesn't get expanded, which is good because she's not relevant enough but that's not the usual norm to be honest.
And further down the story the main female gets in a group date, a dude tryna get her drunk and hook up but main male stops her, well surprise surprise it's because the dude tryna get her drunk is MC's brother :eek: And after MC told his brother to fuck off, he was never heard again.
And not to mention the FMC's little sister is seen only once.
Honestly those are irrelevant characters in the story. But that might have just been me who wants others to get in the main plot

But over all, the relationship wraps well. Solid 8/10
 
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Usually the short story doesn't end well, but this one is just too solid. Well still a little bit unsettled between, spoiler:

The female colleague doesn't get expanded, which is good because she's not relevant enough but that's not the usual norm to be honest.
And further down the story the main female gets in a group date, a dude tryna get her drunk and hook up but main male stops her, well surprise surprise it's because the dude tryna get her drunk is MC's brother :eek: And after MC told his brother to fuck off, he was never heard again.
And not to mention the FMC's little sister is seen only once.
Honestly those are irrelevant characters in the story. But that might have just been me who wants others to get in the main plot

But over all, the relationship wraps well. Solid 8/10
where could u read rhe completed version please?
 
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Fuck off with the brother dudes literally a rapist and now it looks like the mangaka is getting ready to make him a love interest
Hell no
 
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A shorter story that I wasn't expecting to like as much as I did. Of course, due it its short nature, some things felt pushed in for the last two chapters. Although I feel that more could have been added, especially for the side characters, I do recommend reading it once. While it may not be one that many will read over again, I believe it is a nice and refreshing read that gives me a bit of room from the more common romcom troupes.
 

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