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Typos/Rephrasing needed(?) on page 5:
"...than using a nerve this around probably." >> ????????? (no idea)
"But the mischief should stick to the harsh traps" >> ????????? (same)
Typo on page 7: "...something eas
t to eat." >> "...something eas
y to eat."
Typos/Rephrasing needed(?) on page 11:
"I put in your fav
orites" >> "I put in your favo
urites" (also, does she really say that?)
"We'll manage.... if we don't must cover it all in fire soon...." >> ???????? something like: "We'll manage.... if we cover it all in fire soon...." or something