Fuguu na Ossan no Kekkai Jutsu Musou

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Maybe it is just me, but this story makes no sense at any point.
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MC worked tirelessly for 30 years. Was betrayed and thrown out. Didn't even get a thank you.
Few minutes later he decides to work even harder for the kingdom. If someone ruined your life, would you happily server them? Would you be happiest person in the world to again enter the environment where everyone tries to hurt you?
MC is a masochist. If that is your kink, it's for you. If not, then it's not worth it even as a time waster. It is simply bad. There are plenty of good or even average stories on this site to read.
 
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Go lucky & go happy kind of story, so it’s easy going And not bad so far.

As already pointed it’s the classic Japan MC with no backbone tho, so just avoid if you can.
 
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Beyond the obvious 'MC goes out of his way to downplay his own efforts' the author seems to bounce between two ideas over and over.

First, everyone underestimates the MC both because of his specific type of magic and because he himself encourages it. You can generally expect that he will win over at least a few people who actually understand just how OP he is. There might be an arbitrary number of people who keep their original attitude if they aren't required for whatever point the author wanted to make, with a rare chance that someone keeps a grudge.

Second, for whatever reason the MC has this compulsion to teach everyone else that even great people are still people and need support and to express their humanity. Also, being OP he might actually contribute something toward teaching magic or other principles related to how he uses barriers, but mostly just the 'think of their feelings!'

I don't know if it's maybe just related to the target audience (though some of the violence and references to death make me doubt it's for young children), but some of the dialogue and plot points come off as extremely childish to me. People act petty in the most silly of ways (although sometimes leading to potentially fatal situations). I really like some of the stuff going on here but it's hard to really love it when it can't decide how serious or mature it's supposed to be.
 
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MC say or do something good or having common sense: I'm sorry I must have done something bad. I'm such a terrible person.
MC: Exist = 99% of people: You fucking weakling barrier mage subhuman trash. We look down and spit on you for no reason and you should kys.
99% of people: This 13 years old girl is a genius, so we should just leave all the work to her and we don't do anything.
99% of people are super hostile, have 0 common sense, o iq, and 0 eq for no reason
WTF.
 
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This is probably the lowest I've rated something in a while (2/10). I'm honestly just so fucking sick of the trope where the main character is the victim of shallow and ignorant antagonism and is discriminated against for literally no reason. Its just bad writing.
 
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Confics super forced
Bystander Reaction heavy
Face slap heavy
Dragging out battles heavy
Forced pity and self loathing

This is engineered slop.
 
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Absolute slop, vice captain repeatedly fucks himself over by being blatantly obvious with his schemes but then continues to blame MC like he's a victim who shouldn't be punished.
 

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