Fushi no Kami: Rebuilding Civilization Starts with a Village - Vol. 4 Ch. 17 - Words to a Friend

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Wonderful translation, but if I had any complaints, it would be the continued use of western affixes like Mr, Mrs, Miss, and Ma'am. I know this is the correct translation for those nouns, but it just feels awkward while reading manga. -san,-kun, -chan, and -sama feel much more appropriate, especially when we are heading next to the capital and will likely be encountering nobles.
 
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Wonderful translation, but if I had any complaints, it would be the continued use of western affixes like Mr, Mrs, Miss, and Ma'am. I know this is the correct translation for those nouns, but it just feels awkward while reading manga. -san,-kun, -chan, and -sama feel much more appropriate, especially when we are heading next to the capital and will likely be encountering nobles.
it kills me to make changes after I was reading the earlier chapters in which somebody must've painstakingly kept the western affixes, but if there's characters like Maika, Yuika and Itsuki then I'll probably adjust them
 
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Thank you for picking this up! Nice job on this. It's funny timing since I just caught up about the same hour you posted your first chapter. I would really appreciate it, though, if you consistently put hyphens at the end of the line of a split word instead of on the next line. They are supposed to serve as an indication that a word continues on the next line, so it defeats the purpose if they are on the next line.

Lastly, 'desperate' is misspelled on page 27.
 
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Thank you for picking this up! Nice job on this. It's funny timing since I just caught up about the same hour you posted your first chapter. I would really appreciate it, though, if you consistently put hyphens at the end of the line of a split word instead of on the next line. They are supposed to serve as an indication that a word continues on the next line, so it defeats the purpose if they are on the next line.

Lastly, 'desperate' is misspelled on page 27.
oof I didn't know that, I'll keep that in mind; and that's what I get for not using spellcheck lol
 

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