Futago, Futagokoro. - Ch. 4

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The grammar in this seems a bit off in many places. ("I have a have feeling..." "See Mafuyu-san to the eyes as always..." etc.)
Your group may want to consider recruiting a native English speaking proofreader.
 
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Four chapters and the author is making it clear who he favours, the girlfriend is hardly there.
 

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