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justforthelulz Contributor Joined Dec 31, 2019 Messages 17,888 May 22, 2020 #2 The grammar in this seems a bit off in many places. ("I have a have feeling..." "See Mafuyu-san to the eyes as always..." etc.) Your group may want to consider recruiting a native English speaking proofreader.
The grammar in this seems a bit off in many places. ("I have a have feeling..." "See Mafuyu-san to the eyes as always..." etc.) Your group may want to consider recruiting a native English speaking proofreader.
nfzeta Aggregator gang Joined Jan 24, 2018 Messages 794 May 25, 2020 #3 Four chapters and the author is making it clear who he favours, the girlfriend is hardly there.