I don't feel good ragging on someone's art when they're actually picking up a pen instead of relying on mecha-hitler, but holy shit this manga is ugly.
page 5 - "quick/quickly" both times, fits well
page 8 - "good", doesn't really fit the meaning here. Also, looking at that panel at the bottom, you'd think this guy either never drew porn before, or made a name drawing creepy 2 meter tall milfs.
page 9 - "nice" specifically as in "[feels] nice", doesn't work well on its own
page 13 - I am drawing a fucking blank. That is not a word. I can barely even begin speculating what was intended here. This reads like a japanese word. "urazumeto". wtf
page 18 - more of a "it's a shame" than an actual apology. Sorta like "I'm sorry [this happened to you]".
page 25 - "help", noun. Sounds utterly ridiculous.