Gachi Koi Maou-sama - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

[MangaDex]

 

[MewOne]

OMGGGGG theyre using AI sound HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA. All of those sheer effoortrrttts sooo adorkableee

Thanks for the sl, meowbe scansss!!

 

[deathmailrock]

You call them idiots... but you are even more of an idiot... there is no reason to even think of her as a world villain any more...

At most, she's a harmless annoying stalker... who doesn't even properly stalk you...

 

[Nekotofu]

Good for you, Maou-sama

Also, For Yuu-kun. Please make her happy

 

[Deainaa]

You call them idiots... but you are even more of an idiot... there is no reason to even think of her as a world villain any more...

At most, she's a harmless annoying stalker... who doesn't even properly stalk you...

Agreed

 

[Siranto1]

Are these guys really such a threat that the hero is always so gung ho to beat their leader lol

 

[Siranto1]

Honestly one of the best ways to kill the demon king at this rate is for the hero to suddenly act lovey dovey towards her and give her a heart attack haha

 

[Hunter_Main]

We just gonna ignore the fact that he was going to murder her because he was infuriated

 

[olivetho]

the crystallisation of their wisdom is sentence mixing

 

[lesseffective]

We just gonna ignore the fact that he was going to murder her because he was infuriated

Look, he's got just this one thing going for him, man.

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[Fractor123]

I just love how Emma is pretty much helping our girl out now


Thank you for the chapter as always!

 

[Satsuki-Nada]

Everyone is on the side of Maou-chan, even the hero's friends

 

[Extreme-Tactician]

@meowbe At page 9, there are two errors I can spot: "Where were", which should be "which were", and "an unique", which should "a unique". Because unique has the y sound, and not the u sound, it follows the grammar of consonants, not vowels.
Other than that, I don't find much issues with your sentences! But maybe use grammarly to find issues like the one I put above, since it is a bit hard to spot.

It seems Maou-sama really thirsts for Yuu so much. I never expected her to become depressed without his presence. She even has all sorts of merch based on him now! I mean, Bromides? Her servants are really going the extra mile to help her with Yuu's absence. Yuu, you'd better take responsibility now, or she'll fall into deeper degeneracy pretty soon! Just be there for her!

 

[meowbe]

@meowbe At page 9, there are two errors I can spot: "Where were", which should be "which were", and "an unique", which should "a unique". Because unique has the y sound, and not the u sound, it follows the grammar of consonants, not vowels.
Other than that, I don't find much issues with your sentences! But maybe use grammarly to find issues like the one I put above, since it is a bit hard to spot.

It seems Maou-sama really thirsts for Yuu so much. I never expected her to become depressed without his presence. She even has all sorts of merch based on him now! I mean, Bromides? Her servants are really going the extra mile to help her with Yuu's absence. Yuu, you'd better take responsibility now, or she'll fall into deeper degeneracy pretty soon! Just be there for her!

Thanks for catching those issues!

 

[PD712BVM]

Are these guys really such a threat that the hero is always so gung ho to beat their leader lol

I mean the hero clearly can’t beat her as shown in the first chapter and she also stated that she could and would kill everyone so there are only 2 of them left lol.

 

[Latte10]

This is very funny