Gal niPA-chan wa Semararetai

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Honestly, you're pretty much wasting your time reading this one lol. There're a lot other manga with better characters, writing, and ecchi stuff.
Names please, hopefully a straight MC (meaning no secret harems like this POS).
 
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I'm surprised I feel compelled at all to comment which I never do but this nosedived so fast. MC had a lot of personality at the start and now he's just a convenient dildo for the girls. There's not even a present conflict about choosing one, he just finds time to play around with them all and no sort of awareness or personal conflict ever arises between them all. Wild. Trashy smut like this isn't unique at all but I dunno, this just got to me.
It is indeed unique in that sense that he actually makes moves on girls. Now the problem is term girls not girl. In sea of herbivore, blue balled, ED MC's this one stands out in sense that he crossed the line of hand holding. THE PROBLEM ONCE AGAIN IS THAT JAPANESE AUTHORS ONCE AGAIN DIDN'T TAKE THE GOLDEN MIDDLE LANE BUT A FUCKING SHARP TURN TO THE LEFT.

God, Jap authors are edgier than any edgy 8th grader sometimes. Why can't they make something NORMAL? Either a pussy who can't decide or take actions for decades or a POS who tries to fuck everyone.
 
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Okay finally read to ch 38.
I still think MC is POS but to a lesser extent(slightly). He is basically playing around with 3 girls, i do not know if the girls know something (wouldn't be surprised in that kind of manga that girls had some strategy meeting of sorts later on i will tell why).
Story is very artificial and events feel as plastic plants in someone's room, they look nice but that's that, no practical use. Every event and interaction is perfectly placed for convenience.
I really was horny after reading this, quite a rare sight. Women are quite skillful in creating something really erotic via literature, men er greater at visual stimulation. Here? Author is a good drawer of erotic pictures and erotic dialogue (and situations). Basically speaking it would be a nice hentai, the art, the dialogue, the situations are erotic. But when taken with sober mind it's scummy overall, by situation it's cool but when looked overall other situations with all other girls....it's not something you should feel good about.


Now for least or maybe most important. Author is woman and follows the trend of shoujo-josei vibe, where usually FMC is surrounded by guys being flirted with, having intimate relationship with everyone but until explicitly told we are dating (i.e. clear commands of boundaries) everything is allowed.
The vibe is shoujo-josei but tailored towards seinen demographic and up to chapter 38 is tailored as every man's wet dream (hyperbole). Surrounded by women, no restrictions to flirt with other women, women allow the guy to do almost anything (basically if he pushed it he could have sex with them).


Now for the big fat minuss, it's the morality of everything. I like my harems clear, you inform everyone and everyone who isn't agreeing can leave freely without drama. Here? Everyone is vague and MC for example doesn't reject girls advances (no accountability....<- some will understand where i'm coming from) and does it with everyone.
My teenage self is excited, my adult self is disgusted and sadly adult self is much stronger than teenage self.

NOW the POTENTIAL BIGGEST PROBLEM - NTR, to be more specific there is high chance of NETORI and NETORASE in this work. Why? Because it already happened with female side i.e. being cucked. Since author is a woman she might not leave it at that, women in general are more forgiving towards NTR and in sense they are also bigger fans of NTR content than men. If we structure fetish manga hierarchy, cheating/infidelity/NTR stands higher in female side of population.
Japan is very controversial due high amount of cucking media material being produced in their country, while western world might see it in a more negative way, Japanese side might be more forgiving. Next point if there will a large portion of female readers then chances drastically increase.

My biggest warning to everyone, get ready to get screwed royally. Everything feels like preemption towards big drama and NTR content later on. Smut content usually doesn't shy away from this, especially when author is a woman, be very careful. I just feel 3 options here:
1) Smut option - Many fetishes are explored, included some form of NETORI and NETORASE. For know there NTR against women but depending on authors disposition (and i'm fairly sure author is quite liberal/progressive) we will have many butthurt readers and NTR fans calling everyone vanilla insert insult. Tailored more for men initially but quickly will become neutral.
2) The rug pulling - Author is setting up a trap to fuck the male auditorium. There will be quite a blast from girls when they learn of his cheating ways(And they will take revenge by fucking other guys or openly flirting with them right in front of him) . Or he and some girl(if not all three) will find it exciting to explore NETORASE route.
3) Harem king route - Basically he will play around with girls until he finally establishes official relationship and cuts other. Or they all agree to be sex friends (and maybe one will be official gf). Basically speaking content specially tailored for male side.

P.S. Tread carefully, for now this is just a feeling, there are some dubious evidences and leads towards my speculation. Foundation is laid out, if it happens to them, why can't it happen with him? Or other parties having sexual relationship and getting off from it.....So yeah fence is getting narrower.
 

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