Game Sekai Tensei <Dankatsu> ~Gamer wa [Dungeon Shuukatsu no Susume] wo <Hajime kara> Play suru~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 7.1

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You should work on how you divide a sentence between multiple bubbles, the way you do it makes it feel really stilted.
 
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The currency being called "meal" just makes things confusing.
Let's expect "a meal"
What meal? Dinner? Money? Just one meal?
 
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The currency being called "meal" just makes things confusing.
Let's expect "a meal"
What meal? Dinner? Money? Just one meal?
I think meal is a currency. I thinking of changing it into mir to avoid confusion
 
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Man this TL quality dropped the last two chapters. It feels like you went straight MTL with these, without doing the extra work to make the sentences feel natural. Like she calls him Onii-chan because he's an older male, she's not actually calling him "her brother."
 

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