I have some constructive criticism on the typesetting for this chapter.
Please use a different font for everything, it doesn't match the mood of the situation. The fonts in this chapter are usually fonts that is a big no-no in typsetting, too (Arial, Comic Sans).
Your shaping is off. It's basically how the text is shaped in order to fit in the bubble. Theres quite a few hourglasses in this chapter, which is a giant no.
An hourglass is something like:
I really
like
watermelon!
Theres a little dip in the middle, which forns an hourglass shape.
I find that your font size was too big. It looked overwhelming and didn't let your bubble breathe.
I hope that this is helpful for the team and I wish you luck on your scanlating journey!