Geemu Chuuban de Shinu Akuyaku Kizoku ni Tensei Shita Node, Hazure Skill [Tame] wo Kushi Shite Saikyou wo Mezashite Mita - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.1 - Second Pr…

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I actually do like this premise, but the story is still awkward. The author seems to understand the way to facilitate proper and more natural story progression, even showing it off (like the princess's realization), yet still adds unnecessary forced instances, which could be saved for arcs on their own (the forbidden forest)...
 
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... Uh... This is Chapter 2... Why do we need a two page recap of Chapter 1? Author? Author are you okay? Do you have memory problems author? Are we going to have a 4 page recap in Chapter 3?

Also. RIP trying to read page 9. It is barely legible so if you couldn't read it. It says "At least that's how the game was supposed to go at this stage."
 
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That panel on page 9 is kinda hard to read. Maybe putting a grey translucent panel over the hair or using a white/light font color.

I saw you did the thing on page 11 so it's just an editing mistake.
Ah, my bad!😅 Totally forgot about that text—I'll fix it now
 
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Thank you for the chapter. This main character has potential. I really hope he is not one of those who understands the characters' personalities and futuristic events but chooses to distance himself to preserve the plot, like many other main characters from similar stories.
 
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... Uh... This is Chapter 2... Why do we need a two page recap of Chapter 1? Author? Author are you okay? Do you have memory problems author? Are we going to have a 4 page recap in Chapter 3?
I think that manga authors are in some secret contest to find how little story they need to tell while continuing to be published. Spending two pages on a recap means two fewer pages adding to the story.

It will truly be a wonder if the recaps lengthen with each chapter, while the total pages per chapter remain roughly fixed. Eventually, a chapter will be purely a recap, and then the series will have to halt, because the next chapter will be too short to hold a longer recap.
 
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I'm on the fence with this atm. It already feels like the type of story that drags out stupid misunderstandings and other hokey shit. I'll just have to wait and see...
 
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I know people like cleaned pages and all that, but I prefer white boxes over these bad redraws. (Though I'm not sure it's all ai anyways). It's very distracting and makes some of the floating text extremely hard to read.
 
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