Girls, Brooms, and Tomato Sauce

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I mean, just get rid of the brooms, have them ride on pizzas. Pepperoni packed panties, slipping and sliding as the gooey white stuff gets everywhere (and NO it's not what you're thinking... I'm talking about semen).
 

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I feel like I should make a lewd comment on a manga like this.

So uh, I guess the Owner is really good with his hands eh.
 
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OK, just a few pages in I realized this makes no sense at all. Obviously, if you're going to do pizza delivery by broom, the box thing should be slung under the broom, not balancing above in that unstable way. Additional benefit: Put the broom down and the flat bottom of the box sits solidly on the ground. Box should open at the side, with the pizzas racked, so you can get at any of them not just the top one. Basic sane design goes a long way to making your ridiculous magical delivery service safe and efficient!
 
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Its good to be owner.

Yea, the story would have benefited from a bit more though being put into broom flight. Its whimsical and fun but how many girls gained this ability? How did so many congregate at a pizza place? Did it affect men in some way as well, like granting pizza god skills?
 
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Wait... so the only magical thing her are the floating girls, but the broom itself should be normal broom, are the pizzas attached to the broom also affected by the floating power or what but they sure hold tight to the broom at that speed mmm...
 

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