@f8xct
Missing word and correction on page 10: "...to
mimic soil and " >> "...to
manipulate plants and the
terrain"
作り変える : https://thesaurus.weblio.jp/content/%E4%BD%9C%E3%82%8A%E5%A4%89%E3%81%88%E3%82%8B
Typo on page 19: "I ch
cikened out ..." >> "I ch
ickened out ..."
Rephrasing on page 24:
"Sometimes it's feels good toe at places" >> "To eat at places like this sometimes"
"like that" >> "It's
enjoyable/peculiar/interesting." (choose the one you like.)
https://www.weblio.jp/content/%E5%91%B3%E3%81%8C%E3%81%82%E3%82%8B
Rephrasing on page 25:
"Do you feel better with" >> "Which one felt good?"
"Me... or with her?" >> "Me... or that girl?"
Also, i've sent you a message.