Why are you scanlating this? It's been
officially licensed in English for a while now. 17 chapters already translated officially.
Do you not agree with the official translation or something?
Edit: I mean you can still scanlate it, but I'm not sure why you would. There are plenty of other series with no English scanlations.
Edit 2: Okay I skimmed through it like an hour ago after I made this comment, but I just sat down to properly read it.
First of all, the font you're using is a bad fit for a manga. The font you used in the credits page would work better. Although there are a lot of different possible fonts you could use. I found
a guide someone linked on the MangaDex Discord that shows off a lot of different fonts that could work.
Now, the grammar. I hate to say this, but the grammar feels off in too many places too count. And I swear I saw an uncapitalized I by itself somewhere in there. Really simple mistakes like that. A lot of proofreading needs to be done.