Goshujinsama no Shikabane

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@Thirsty545 but I would need staff willing to do this

I need a translator and redrawer for this series since it seems to have a lot for pages to do for each chapter.
 
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The art is fine most of the time, but the story and dialogues are garbage.

btw, add comedy tag for this one.

His two friends could definitely die from having their legs cut, but they are not shocked or traumatized.

I don't understand this :
The lines are clearly bad, i think the drawing has been moved to the right to have a more dynamic layout, then the author had to extend the lines ?
Anyway, it's poorly done.
huh, if there is one thing that i hate about any kind of story, is lack of human emotions in the characters, i wont even give this manga a chance just because of what you showed ! thanks for saving me time here
 
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Sorry for the necro but I looked at the raws for this (bookwalker) and realized the translator made a mistake when translating
The art is fine most of the time, but the story and dialogues are garbage.

btw, add comedy tag for this one.
This one was translated fine, even the fonts used are similar to the raws. The original dialogue is roughly the same but the characters sound more agitated.

His two friends could definitely die from having their legs cut, but they are not shocked or traumatized.
The first speech bubble roughly reads: "I will definitely... I will definitely come back alive!!"
The second one reads: "So you better not die on me!!"
And the third one belongs to the MC and reads: "so you better sit tight (and wait for help)!" with the small part being another "you better not die on me!"
The next panel should be read from right to left and reads: "...this guy..." "these are definitely the words of someone who'd die young" with the other guy retorting "well, right now, I think we're the ones who'll be dying young..."

And also, considering the used fonts (even in the raws), the MC is definitely shouting at them and is clearly in distress. So I'd guess the other guys are just taken aback by how much more the MC seems to be affected by this situation.
 
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