Grace of the Vineyard

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Man that "father" what a gigantic piece of shit. Also seems like he pressured Ms Hawkins' paramour into an engagement by leaning on her family, thus why Hawkins had an axe to grind there.
 
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The ending was quite rushed. Though I believe everyone knows who Ruby's father is, the story didn't touch that topic at all, completely wasting that potential.
Right now, the future of our dear couple is also quite uncertain, so an epilogue would be much appreciated.
 
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Ain't no way this is only erotica XD
ch5 go full on yuri time :huh:
 
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This was good but needed more time in the oven. The ending felt very rushed and left me with too many unanswered questions.
 
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Banger, could have been a few chapters longer to get into those nitty gritty details and expand those character points that were hinted. But overall it ended in a somewhat clean chop. Usually not a fan of open endings but I can tell they'll work out just fine.

Side note when Ruby was going to go say goodbye to Grace at the end, I REALLY thought she'd be in there banging someone already lol
 

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