Grand Dwarf ~Machi Kou Shokunin, Takumi no Waza de Isekai Musou~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - Encounter

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I like the premise of the story let me see where it goes.
 
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Too much dicking. Even if you are perfectly right about performance, you do not make fundamental alterations in the property of another without prior permission. And, with a large supply of alternative materials, the motivation for making the alteration even with permission isn't there.
 
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The girl looks interesting, with her one side burned and missing an arm. Her having a prosthetic means that healing magic is either not omnipotent or requires a really good mage, which will cost you way too much. Also i guess he just introduced a gun, wars will become deadlier.
 
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Too much dicking. Even if you are perfectly right about performance, you do not make fundamental alterations in the property of another without prior permission. And, with a large supply of alternative materials, the motivation for making the alteration even with permission isn't there.
Just need to remember he will not die alone without friends, and family if he consider those moral common concepts or he wasn´t a weirdo genius specialist
 
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I'm rarely convinced by the first chapter of an isekai series, but Grand Dwarf had me hooked right away. Love the hardened, 70-year-old, machine shop artisan for an MC -- his sly grin and perpetually crooked cigarette, so cool. Art's really nice, too. The double-page spread of the new world (pg. 13) and the first appearance of the "colossal queen class" eyeless (pg. 52) are particularly striking. Hope Saito Naotake can keep this level of quality up while telling a worthwhile story.

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TS dude, can you not line-break words everywhich way you damn well please?? It looks like cancer. Maybe it doesn't matter in moon runes, but in English it does. Get a dictionary, look for the center dots. That's where breaks can go. If there ain't any, then the word can't be broken! Or use Word or Writer or whatever and watch how they auto-line-break when you push the word against the page margin.
If it can't break and runs a bit over the bubble, no big deal. It's still light-years better than shit like "str-ength".
 

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