Grand Dwarf - Vol. 2 Ch. 8 - Second

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i had hope in this work, such potential, it isnt the worst, but could be so much more...
and no way in hell this manga belong in the seinen tag

It's an ok series. I don't think it goes hard enough to be an absurdist comedy, but it goes too fast to build up any satisfying drama.

I'm really not quire sure what this manga wants to be.
 
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It was rather noticeable how much filler this chapter contained.
With the amount of dialogue stretching this thing out, it felt like several minutes had passed between her pointing the gun at the demon and her firing it
 
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i know yall wanna make the demon scary but i kinda just makes the mcs look kind of bad when if he just told her about this earlier those soldiers wouldn't have died for no reason. or if she just started blasting immediately and when that kinda worked/didnt work he would explain the new feature
 

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