GraPara! - Ch. 129 - Ah… Ngh Ah… (Censored)

[whorainzone]

Korean NTR is the fucking worst. The ending of illicit love changed how I approach 18+ manhwas. I only read complete series. I check the ratings (if it's below 3.8, I'm not touching it), I read the final chapter first, and I read the comments. Never again.

bro lets not start with illicit love that shit was frying me back than week for week... insane. The koreans have that one problem that they change their perspecitve instantly when they go down in ranking. Glorious homecoming was fine a solid revenge story, It went down in ranking and the author let one woman(woman from the beginning dont exactly know fmc or not) gets raped. His plan was in vain, the manhwa didnt go up in ranking and the rape scene just enraged the people again... authors are so fucking dumb sometime

 

[box2024]

I'm just going by the official description. It is called an "NTR comedy manga". I also saw a comment from 3yrs ago warning people before they read that it is NTR.

The way the manga was set up was an romantic comedy with elaments of ntr and that is what was given up untill now the problem is it's not NYR Sakura is just cheating from a knee jerk reaction it's bland it's boring there isn't any of those elements that people find interesting with ntr. Plus now that there is cheating anything else will be seen as just cheating fumi could be next to have around with this same guy and it won't have the same impact as Sakura your seeing a manga peek the reader engagement for this averages about 400 comments a chapter with the high ones being the bait ntr side of the story there is no more bait no with out that there isn't anything to keep readers invested in the female lead and male leads relationship they could stay together and she sleep around with this guy behind his back or not but it makes no difference now. I don't think they will stay together since fuckboi wants her the leave not only him but drop him as her agent he gave her that ultimatum and it seems since her cracked her she intends to say yes to that.

 

[SS-2010]

I have never seen an author that tried to mix two opposite genres... I shouldve known when I read its a comedic romcom ntr story. She really couldve created a blueprint for the upcoming romcom ntr series but driving 200mph into a wall is wild.

But it really existed bros. NTR + RomCom is here : https://mangadex.org/title/bf16d046-cea1-401b-89bf-5cf898824c3a/futei-no-olympia I'm reading it now, so hilarious. (Someone suggested it in reply to Airi Katsura's X scam about making the NTR romcom)

 

[deleted-user-bd0fb46e6a]

30 pages. Damn, guess that's what happens when you piss off 70% of your readership

i don't think I have ever seen an author receive so much backlash Holy shit. It's insane. I kid you not when I tell you that even some NTR enjoyers (JP) Feel bad for Shinobu.

 

[box2024]

30 pages. Damn
guess that's what happens when you piss off 70% of your readership

Yes but now at least one person has mentioned this comment section and how much hate she has on X I swear how stupid can some people be it's hard enough to get anime and manga outside Japan with payment processers playing at the moral police Google and bing are doing the same thing plus morality laws in the name of protecting the children of course. Would the Simpsons stop predicting things.

 

[whorainzone]

But it really existed bros. NTR + RomCom is here : https://mangadex.org/title/bf16d046-cea1-401b-89bf-5cf898824c3a/futei-no-olympia I'm reading it now, so hilarious. (Someone suggested it in reply to Airi Katsura's X scam about making the NTR romcom)

What is the premise of the show? Unfortunately, I don't speak Spanish or Portuguese. Is it a rom-com with NTR, or does it just use NTR bait? Or is it actual NTR?
nvm read the first chapter. Motherfucker gets devoured

 

[hugorito420]

The way the manga was set up was an romantic comedy with elaments of ntr and that is what was given up untill now the problem is it's not NYR Sakura is just cheating from a knee jerk reaction it's bland it's boring there isn't any of those elements that people find interesting with ntr. Plus now that there is cheating anything else will be seen as just cheating fumi could be next to have around with this same guy and it won't have the same impact as Sakura your seeing a manga peek the reader engagement for this averages about 400 comments a chapter with the high ones being the bait ntr side of the story there is no more bait no with out that there isn't anything to keep readers invested in the female lead and male leads relationship they could stay together and she sleep around with this guy behind his back or not but it makes no difference now. I don't think they will stay together since fuckboi wants her the leave not only him but drop him as her agent he gave her that ultimatum and it seems since her cracked her she intends to say yes to that.

Don't doubt that they will end up together,i don't the ending is going to be so bad because for the mc because probably the magazine will no let the author do a doujinshi ntr thing to the manga at maximum a break up, him forgiving her and move on with their lifes.(i mean she promise a romcom besides the ntr so we only can see what she is going to do).

Now the question is how the author will try to catch the readers attention because she received a big hate from the two most opossites kinda of fans(ntr fans and romcom fans).

I think the ending isn't to be so dark because is a manga not a doujinshi or a hentai.Probably the editors will ask her to not do somenthing like this.

 

[deleted-user-bd0fb46e6a]

Don't doubt that they will end up together,i don't the ending is going to be so bad because for the mc because probably the magazine will no let the author do a doujinshi ntr thing to the manga at maximum a break up, him forgiving her and move on with their lifes.(i mean she promise a romcom besides the ntr so we only can see what she is going to do).

Now the question is how the author will try to catch the readers attention because she received a big hate from the two most opossites kinda of fans(ntr fans and romcom fans).

I think the ending isn't to be so dark because is a manga not a doujinshi or a hentai.Probably the editors will ask her to not do somenthing like this.

Wouldn't be too sure about that. Kodansha also greenlit the "Hoshimi files" from Guilty Circle.

 

[hugorito420]

Wouldn't be too sure about that. Kodansha also greenlit the "Hoshimi files" from Guilty Circle.

I mean guilty circle isn't tagged as a romcom so that makes sense and has a darker story than grapara.

If the author from grapara made the same thing she would not get that hate she is reciving.

And guilty circle has the ntr since the beggining and is not a romcom or romance so is not like grapara.(probably grapara will have lighter end).

 

[box2024]

Don't doubt that they will end up together,i don't the ending is going to be so bad because for the mc because probably the magazine will no let the author do a doujinshi ntr thing to the manga at maximum a break up, him forgiving her and move on with their lifes.(i mean she promise a romcom besides the ntr so we only can see what she is going to do).

Now the question is how the author will try to catch the readers attention because she received a big hate from the two most opossites kinda of fans(ntr fans and romcom fans).

I think the ending isn't to be so dark because is a manga not a doujinshi or a hentai.Probably the editors will ask her to not do somenthing like this.

She isn't going to change a thing she has already said so the criticism means nothing.

 

[box2024]

Wouldn't be too sure about that. Kodansha also greenlit the "Hoshimi files" from Guilty Circle.

What are the hoshimi files? He is right guilty circle wasn't sold to readers as a romance let alone one with comedy.

 

[deleted-user-bd0fb46e6a]

She isn't going to change a thing she has already said so the criticism means nothing.

She only said she's not going to redraw the chapter, we'll have to wait and see where this is going from here. That is if some of us are even going to continue reading. its probably better to drop it tho.

There's better manga and manhwa out there. We don't really have to waste our time getting worked up over... this

What are the hoshimi files? He is right guilty circle wasn't sold to readers as a romance let alone one with comedy.

The chapters where she gets banged in front of MC. 190-196

 

[Edway89]

Man, I think its gonna be the worst case scenario. MC gonna be begging after her trying to convince her he dd not cheat, even after if he finds out she cheated.

 

[box2024]

She only said she's not going to redraw the chapter, we'll have to wait and see where this is going from here. That is if some of us are even going to continue reading. its probably better to drop it tho

The chapters where she gets banged in front of MC. 190-196

To be honest that was so over the top it was funnier than GraPara.

 

[hugorito420]

She isn't going to change a thing she has already said so the criticism means nothing.

I know but we don't the ending she has planned so the only thing you have to do is wait(i still expect her make the mc forgive her and make they ending up together).

My point is that this is not a hentai or dounjinshi so is most probable thing is that will not have those dark endings like the hentais or doujinshi.The magazine probable has restrictions.

People are treating like this is a hentai or doujinshi(this is a echii manga).And for me the wrost ending she can do for the mc is a ending like karami zakari.

 

[box2024]

I know but we don't the ending she has planned so the only thing you have to do is wait(i still expect her make the mc forgive her and make they ending up together).

My point is that this is not a hentai or dounjinshi so is most probable thing is that will not have those dark endings like the
hentais and doujinshis(magazine probable has restrictions in some aspects).


People are treating like this is a hentai or doujinshi(this is a echii manga).And for me the wrost ending she can do for the mc is a ending like karami zakari.

That what most comments on the raw site think will happen. Im also pretty sure that they won't be together in the end one of those classic the main love interests part ways for some stupid reason at the end this time though because the female lead wanted to cheat with a good looking guy.

 

[Edway89]

Glasses is also not without fault. Seems like author was on mission to make all characters unlikeable.

 

[whorainzone]

Glasses is also not without fault. Seems like author was on mission to make all characters unlikeable.

How? because she got nearly raped? yeah that was stupid af. But if its because she likes shinobu than idk man she didnt knew he was in a relationship with bitch-chan

 

[Wyrm666]

Well it will peak once and thats it. The romcom fans are gone by now for sure, the ntr fans are enraged aswell... cant see how this will be interesting after the 3 time tho
And does a ntr story exist that makes sense and is not generic? with a decent story?

Tsuriganesou's Ominaeshi. It's enraging, but well written. It's a one-shot though.

Long form? No. You can't write a long form NTR without the characters having to act absolutely retarded and/or psychopathic for the "plot" to work.

It's a fetish driven genre and only peeps with the fetish can enjoy a retarded FMC being taken again and again with increasingly idiotic set ups.

 

[hugorito420]

What are the hoshimi files? He is right guilty circle wasn't sold to readers as a romance let alone one with comedy.

Is a guy(the villian and a guy who knew about her sister)bagging the fml in front of the mc but i mean this was really bad but in a end the guy who raped the girl in front of the mc was arrested(it was a plan from both fmc and mc).