GraPara! - Ch. 134 - By Strip, You Mean…?

[master-34]

so about the ghost writer thing is there a new person making the new chapters?

 

[Des0]

That's a great script, my friend. I think it's pretty plausible too; the key thing is that Shinobu needs to clearly convey his love to Fumi.

I like your script too. I actually think it's much better than KA.

To be honest, my own script was partly inspired by yours as well.

 

[SS-2010]

How do they do that in two chapters? I mean there are ways that would take only two pages but it won't happen. Which begs the question how much of Sakura sex scene will even be shown? Her and fumi will be front and center next chapter for sure I'm not sure shionbu wants to go thru with the scene showing that yes he has strong feelings for fumi at this point sakura isn't acting as if she misses shionbu but more his input on her career and life not really his love of her. I can really see them never meeting again as well.

I think Shinobu and Sakura meeting will be the cliffchanger for next chapter.

Forget what I said, I don't know why I thought you were referring to the relationship between the fuckboi and Sakura.

Friends, @Alsatia told us her idea of the proper ending already. In chapter 135, Sakura decided to contact Shinobu and they meet. It's simple like that. So, the 2 chapters left will be used effectively. Shinobu talked with Sakura or maybe from Mio's arrangement in chapter 135. Then, the author can use time skip in chapter 136 like other manga. We'll see who end up with whom from the time skip.

 

[A.Tanakaaa]

Fucboy's room in chapter 127 seems smaller than in chapter 134. If it's the same room, he must rearranged it. We can see he removed the giant TV from the table and replacing it with a smaller wall-mounted TV. The space where the original TV stood has been replaced with a computer with a keyboard.

Sakura and fucboy's relationship is unclear but Mio immediately senses that Sakura is uncomfortable by fucboy's words. This means Mio knows about their relationship or even knows that the person she had one-time sex with was fucboy. (Sakura forgave fucboy but said she couldn't be his girlfriend but a close friend)

IMHO, Sakura tells Nagi and Mio that she had sex immediately after realizing Shinobu cheated on her (in her view). So, Nagi was drawing a parallel to her own similar experience and soothing Sakura that it actually helps when performing nude or sex scenes.

Then, Sakura visited fucboy and felt disappointed by his opinion after receiving the sex scene offer in the afternoon (she met Nagi and Mio in the morning because this is her day off). That is why she stood because she didn't expect to spend so much time in his room and he didn't let her sit or provide some drink as well.

FYI, in Japan, if the homeowner wears slippers, guests must wear them too. If the homeowner does not wear slippers, guests simply need to remove their shoes without switching to slippers. And that the homeowner is responsible for providing slippers for visiting guests if they themselves wear slippers inside the house. In chapter 127, fucboy didn't wear slippers in his room but he wore them in chapter 134 so he must provide Sakura the slippers in chapter 134 too.

For the non-romantic conversation, if I were Sakura's boyfriend, I'd clearly say "(Honey) I don't want you to do it." instead of saying like fucboy said that "You definitely SHOULD decline." It's obvious that fucboy avoided to use the words that include his feelings for Sakura because his feelings for her couldn't convince Sakura to reject the offer. That means... you guys can guess?

Fucboy's words implies he can give only opinion because there is a gap in their relationship. He can't say anything like he's a Sakura's family member or a person she cares. I think the author brought fucboy back just to twist the story that Sakura did not dating him. The author changed the story in order to reduce the damage from chapter 129. We can think that fucboy is out of the story now because only 2 chapters left.

I believe the author intended to convey these points to redeem Sakura's image. But all attempts failed. The anger and hatred directed at her following chapter 129 caused readers to view everything negatively, effectively severing the author's ability to communicate with the readers.

The ending can be anything since it is clear the author no longer cares about narrative consistency regarding events prior to chapter 132.

My wish is for the author to write the remaining two chapters in a way that makes readers forgive Sakura—or at least hate her less—and instead direct that anger and hatred toward Yuma or KA.

 

[SS-2010]

so about the ghost writer thing is there a new person making the new chapters?

My wish is for the author to write the remaining two chapters in a way that makes readers forgive Sakura—or at least hate her less—and instead direct that anger and hatred toward Yuma or KA.

IMHO, Keishi Nishikida sensei, the illustrator and holder of 50% of the rights, is that ghost writer.

He now took over Grapara and rushed to wrap it up in 2 chapters instead of 3.

Hence, we can expect a satisfied ending even though it might not align with the storyline prior to chapter 132 because Airi Katsura (sensei), the problem maker, is not with Grapara anymore. LOL

Please don't forget that half of Grapara's revenue belongs to him so he has the right to protect his own benefits as well.

 

[VuongOuki]

IMHO, Keishi Nishikida sensei, the illustrator and holder of 50% of the rights, is that ghost writer.

He now took over Grapara and rushed to wrap it up in 2 chapters instead of 3.

Hence, we can expect a satisfied ending even though it might not align with the storyline prior to chapter 132 because Airi Katsura (sensei), the problem maker, is not with Grapara anymore. LOL

Please don't forget that half of Grapara's revenue belongs to him so he has the right to protect his own benefits as well.

Honestly, I wonder how Airi managed to convince Keishi Nishikida-sensei to agree to draw chapter 129, huh?

 

[samhiuy]

まあ雄真はそういう奴だと思ってたよ、自分の女には濡れ場とかやらせたくない独占欲の塊のような男。 じゃないとヤッた翌日に現彼氏だった忍にあんな事言いに行かんわな、自分は寝取りとか最悪な事してるくせにね。
Well, I figured Yuma was that kind of guy—a man consumed by possessiveness who wouldn't want his woman doing steamy scenes. Otherwise, he wouldn't have gone to Shinobu—her boyfriend at the time—and said what he did the very next day after sleeping with her; I mean, the nerve of him, considering he was the one committing the ultimate betrayal by stealing another man's girl.

それとさくらよ、お前からクソみたいな事して振ったくせに忍、忍って本当に自分の意志がここに来ても希薄な奴だな、いい加減に自分の確固たる意志を持てよ。
And as for Sakura... even though she was the one who dumped Shinobu after pulling that shitty stunt, she's still all "Shinobu this, Shinobu that." She really lacks any sense of personal agency, even at this stage. She needs to grow a backbone and make up her own damn mind.

あと2話という事だが、最後はふみちゃんが濡れ場を経験して大きく羽ばたいてる横に立つ忍を見て涙するさくらという、さくらがふみに寝取られたエンドを希望するわ。
With only two chapters left, I’m hoping for an ending where Sakura gets "cuckolded" by Fumi—watching Fumi soar to new heights after filming a steamy scene, with Shinobu standing right by her side, while Sakura is left in tears.

A really good Japanese comment that sums up most people's thoughts. Except the part about Fumi filming the sex scene haha, since I don't think it's really that necessary to an actress's career.

I have also read a lot of Chinese comments saying they want Yuma to be cucked hard lol For example:

中西好man好有保護慾喔 最後兩集可以換成綠這個人嗎
Nakanishi is so manly and so protective (sarcasm). Can we switch to cucking this guy for the last two chapters?

 

[Wyrm666]

I be smart n stuff and talk about hentai. Life.

Hentai... it's a blessing and a curse. But sometimes we find some cozy places in this little perverted hobby.

 

[Wyrm666]

Why you post this hentai again man? That hentai is nothing more than sad tbh.

Yes, you want to kick that guy's ass and give him a hug at the same time.

 

[Wyrm666]

A friend just messaged me saying he believed Airi Katsura (sensei) will wrap up Grapara with her signature plot : On Fumi and Shinobu’s wedding day, Sakura will make a video call to Shinobu while engaging in a group sex session and say "Happy wedding!" LOL

So, Airi Katsura (sensei) will just keep recycling the same characters and scenarios over and over again. LOL

Apart from ruining her reputation, Airi Katsura (sensei) has also become a laughingstock.

Is your friend here in the room with us?

 

[Alsatia]

Holy heck. I sleep and wake up for work only to see 6 more pages of comments happened over night. I missed out on some stuff!

 

[Wyrm666]

I think the story is good if you read it carefully.

The story sets up a scenario suggesting the orange-haired girl is the one committing NTR. But it was the MC's girlfriend who NTR'd the MC away from her! They were already in love and the MC's girlfriend who was the orange-haired girl's best friend stole the MC for herself!

So, the real FMC of the story is the orange-haired girl who looked like a villain on the start. She was the victim of NTR before the story even began.

I'm not surprised it's adapted to be an anime.

So it's a ESH scenario?

 

[Wyrm666]

She said a year of being his girlfriend was enough and precious time for her. She aspired to become an idol but chose to work as AV film staff to gain experience, intending to quit later and pursue an idol career because she had received a business card inviting her to become an idol while they went to the beach.

Does that actually happen in Japan? Someone having a legit career after porn?

 

[Wyrm666]

I'm probably as casual as can be when it comes to gaming.

So, next game is Lies of P, correct?

 

[Wyrm666]

You retards are literal drama queens, holy shit. Her career is going to be fine, your personal hatred of her writing isn't going to change that.

 

[Wyrm666]

he's not getting NTR'd lol just a break up.

The jaded ntrbros will cry if the ntrman is ntr'd himself...

 

[SS-2010]

Honestly, I wonder how Airi managed to convince Keishi Nishikida-sensei to agree to draw chapter 129, huh?

We don't know but I think Keishi Nishikida sensei disagreed but Airi Katasura (sensei) and her crazy editor insisted to do it. So his vote was 1 out of 3. But now the situation changed because I believe Kodansha has stepped in to control the damage. Maybe the editor got fired with Airi Katsura (sensei) but she still has 50% right of Grapara unless she sold it to Kodansha or Keishi Nishikida sensei.

 

[SS-2010]

Is your friend here in the room with us?

No. He's not serious about manga.

 

[Alsatia]

Ohhhhh that's why there's 6 pages. That makes sense.

So, next game is Lies of P, correct?

I dunno. It's a souls like right? I'm absolutely suck at those games. I've yet to beat elden ring.

 

[SS-2010]

So it's a ESH scenario?

I don't think so but I'm not sure. LOL Because the author just introduced another beautiful woman to be the MC's co-worker at the end of the lastest chapter 127. OMG!

References : Kanojo no Tomodachi manga