GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 135 - Sex Scenes

[diphuc1]

The timeskip is even more weirder because we have no clue what even happened there. Not a single piece of explanation is offered on shinobus side. On Yumas side we know that he at least tried to talk Sakura out of her plan.

Good catch, on the ShiFumi side all we were left off with before the jump is Fumi noting the pen and then "agreeing" with Shinobu's idea.

 

[diphuc1]

Is a Airi Katsura work don't expect coherent things to happen.She can still pull off a suprise in the end just like in the end of Karami Zakari.

Kousei was such a pathetic MC in comparison though that the ending actually didn't come as too much a surprise imo.

 

[jonasadan]

B-A-I-T. (no idea on the chances for this idea though).

if nothing else the talk did make him bring out that fawking PEN, and help him finish his adjustments to the script. I don't know how much of the movie they've finished shooting in one month, but it'd be weird to film the intimacy scene first so Fumi probably only off scripted for this one scene while following everything else I'd say.

Ah yeah, I think I misspoke, I think it's better to say that specific scene.

Is a Airi Katsura work don't expect coherent things to happen.She can still pull off a suprise in the end just like in the end of Karami Zakari.

If you're referring to Karami manga, I saw many people here say that she wasn't the author, that it was someone else and that's why the characters were different from the doujinshi. I don't know how true this is, but if it is, I don't think it's the best use Karami manga as example.

 

[hugorito420]

Kousei was such a pathetic MC in comparison though that the ending actually didn't come as too much a surprise imo.

In manga the suprise was that Lida didn't cheat on Kousei and refused the threesome and she just lied to make ease his cuck fetish.(it was just revelead in the last chapter of the manga)

But is true that Kousei is the msot pathetic MC Airi has ever made by miles(Keigo and Shinobu are way better than him)

 

[Dirigibull]

What if Toppy never intervened..? What would have been the story if the director got Sakura's virginity..?

I feel like that's the kind of plotline in like, the bad ending/worst ending of a VN.. cuz she'd be falling victim to a very dangerous man within the industry..

Thinking about that gives me AiCan vibes.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

Good catch, on the ShiFumi side all we were left off with before the jump is Fumi noting the pen and then "agreeing" with Shinobu's idea.

Something must’ve happened in that month for her to go off script. she knows that he was against the scene from the start, he told her he doesn’t want her to do it even before the script was overworked. If she really goes off the rails because of a simple pen then I don’t know what to think about this.

 

[hugorito420]

Ah yeah, I think I misspoke, I think it's better to say that specific scene.

If you're referring to Karami manga, I saw many people here say that she wasn't the author, that it was someone else and that's why the characters were different from the doujinshi. I don't know how true this is, but if it is, I don't think it's the best use Karami manga as example.

She wasn't the author but she allowed the person tondo it and probably helped her with some things.I remember seeing a interview or a fan questioning her and she said Airi helped her with the manga.

But Airi is still the author and Kei Mikke is considered the artist.If you see the Karami Zakari manga the only thing that was changed is the ending related to the doujinshi and the FMC is not a nympomaniac in this one.

 

[whorainzone]

Something must’ve happened in that month for her to go off script. she knows that he was against the scene from the start, he told her he doesn’t want her to do it even before the script was overworked. If she really goes off the rails because of a simple pen then I don’t know what to think about this.

If this is really because of the pen than fumi def is

 

[diphuc1]

Something must’ve happened in that month for her to go off script. she knows that he was against the scene from the start, he told her he doesn’t want her to do it even before the script was overworked. If she really goes off the rails because of a simple pen then I don’t know what to think about this.

Zero communication mixed with deception. It seems like I'm being mean and biased since I'm a ShiKura shill, but the deception IS actually because of her kind hearted nature and thus not wanting to make things any more difficult for Shinobu. Viewing it this way removes all "malice" from what she's doing here, but not necessarily make it any harder to stomach for some, even if she's doing it out her love for Shinobu.

 

[box2024]

Yes it's an unwanted ending for sure.

Sakura and Shinobu's relationship was first stolen by Yuma and Fumi. Yet, feelings for each other remained in their hearts. Yuma and Fumi, who separated them, had not yet accepted each other's aspirations. Sakura and Shinobu pursued their goals while still thinking of each other. Yuma and Fumi had a change of heart regarding their respective aspirations and began to understand each other's feelings, with Sakura directing her love towards Yuma and Shinobu towards Fumi, thus completing the true NTR (Netorare - cheating/cuckolding)... An unwanted ending. We don't need this kind of aesthetic.


Man this comment gave us all something to talk about.

When Shinobu thought of "making someone shine like back then," it wasn't Fumi, but Sakura. Furthermore, judging from the length of the hair, the person Shinobu is drawing in the storyboard in the same frame is Sakura, not Fumi, isn't it? Perhaps Fumi saw this storyboard and realized it wasn't her, but Sakura. Moreover, Shinobu corrected the storyboard with the pen Sakura gave her, right in front of Fumi. (The director is drawing Sakura with the pen Sakura gave him...) At this moment, Fumi must have become certain that Shinobu's heart was directed not towards her, but towards Sakura, right?
11 hours ago

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

Zero communication mixed with deception. It seems like I'm being mean and biased since I a ShiKura shill, but the deception might be because of her kind hearted nature and not wanting to make things difficult for Shinobu. Viewing it this way will remove any malice from what she's doing here, but not necessarily make it any harder to stomach for some.

Even if she only wanted for him to only look at her that’s like two steps too far and in the wrong direction to boot.

Please don’t tell me the producer had a hand in this without shinobu knowing. But that would also be weird because why would he leave out the male actor who’s clearly surprised.

 

[hugorito420]

If this is really because of the pen than fumi def is

Her doing this because of a FUCKING PEN is hella stupid and Airi just want a excuse to that happen.

 

[diphuc1]

Yes it's an unwanted ending for sure.

Sakura and Shinobu's relationship was first stolen by Yuma and Fumi. Yet, feelings for each other remained in their hearts. Yuma and Fumi, who separated them, had not yet accepted each other's aspirations. Sakura and Shinobu pursued their goals while still thinking of each other. Yuma and Fumi had a change of heart regarding their respective aspirations and began to understand each other's feelings, with Sakura directing her love towards Yuma and Shinobu towards Fumi, thus completing the true NTR (Netorare - cheating/cuckolding)... An unwanted ending. We don't need this kind of aesthetic.


Man this comment gave us all something to talk about.

When Shinobu thought of "making someone shine like back then," it wasn't Fumi, but Sakura. Furthermore, judging from the length of the hair, the person Shinobu is drawing in the storyboard in the same frame is Sakura, not Fumi, isn't it? Perhaps Fumi saw this storyboard and realized it wasn't her, but Sakura. Moreover, Shinobu corrected the storyboard with the pen Sakura gave her, right in front of Fumi. (The director is drawing Sakura with the pen Sakura gave him...) At this moment, Fumi must have become certain that Shinobu's heart was directed not towards her, but towards Sakura, right?
11 hours ago

I mean, 1st commentor scenario would be something I really don't want (mostly the fucboi X Sakura bit), but chances of this are higher than we both want to admit at this stage still while we just sitting around counting down the days.

2nd comment let us have a bit of fun, but we need to REMAIN CALM.

 

[jonasadan]

Something must’ve happened in that month for her to go off script. she knows that he was against the scene from the start, he told her he doesn’t want her to do it even before the script was overworked. If she really goes off the rails because of a simple pen then I don’t know what to think about this.

From the way I see it, in 134, Fumi makes it clear that she would do it, including nudity/sexual scenes, and then in 135, Shinobu assumes that Fumi doesn't have or shouldn't do nudity without asking Fumi. I think I can understand Fumi's annoyance, but I don't think it's enough to justify it.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

When Shinobu thought of "making someone shine like back then," it wasn't Fumi, but Sakura.

This sentence doesn’t make sense. Of course he would think of Sakura. He literally built her career from scratch to where she is now. In every project they took part in, he made sure that she got a lot of attention. He even cast aside his own feelings on the island dating show to make sure she gets more spotlight.

 

[hugorito420]

Man this comment gave us all something to talk about.

When Shinobu thought of "making someone shine like back then," it wasn't Fumi, but Sakura. Furthermore, judging from the length of the hair, the person Shinobu is drawing in the storyboard in the same frame is Sakura, not Fumi, isn't it? Perhaps Fumi saw this storyboard and realized it wasn't her, but Sakura. Moreover, Shinobu corrected the storyboard with the pen Sakura gave her, right in front of Fumi. (The director is drawing Sakura with the pen Sakura gave him...) At this moment, Fumi must have become certain that Shinobu's heart was directed not towards her, but towards Sakura, right?
11 hours ago

Oh no that discussion again no😰😰

 

[diphuc1]

Even if she only wanted for him to only look at her that’s like two steps too far and in the wrong direction to boot.

Please don’t tell me the producer had a hand in this without shinobu knowing. But that would also be weird because why would he leave out the male actor who’s clearly surprised.

Agreed that this was excessive, it's really due to the rushed ending as well though. I don't think Producer guy will become relevant again, this was definitely a solo Fumi plan given the actor reaction imo, and Shinobu's as well.

 

[Dirigibull]

Not all women are bad! Just.. most from what we see in media these days.

It's a form of surivorship bias. Since women/men are largely portrayed this way in popular forms of media, people begin to fear forming relationships for fear of encountering such relationships. I'm also partially guilty of this. Trying to get past that, but it's not easy.

 

[Apollo_Ibis]

Agreed that this was excessive, it's really due to the rushed ending as well though. I don't think Producer guy will become relevant again, this was definitely a solo Fumi plan given the actor reaction imo, and Shinobu's as well.

Idk what she was thinking I just hope she’s able to stick the landing even if she didn’t get the chance to flesh out the story in the way she wanted. And by sticking the landing I mean ShiFumi ending. I won’t accept anything else.

 

[whorainzone]

Yes it's an unwanted ending for sure.

Sakura and Shinobu's relationship was first stolen by Yuma and Fumi. Yet, feelings for each other remained in their hearts. Yuma and Fumi, who separated them, had not yet accepted each other's aspirations. Sakura and Shinobu pursued their goals while still thinking of each other. Yuma and Fumi had a change of heart regarding their respective aspirations and began to understand each other's feelings, with Sakura directing her love towards Yuma and Shinobu towards Fumi, thus completing the true NTR (Netorare - cheating/cuckolding)... An unwanted ending. We don't need this kind of aesthetic.


Man this comment gave us all something to talk about.

When Shinobu thought of "making someone shine like back then," it wasn't Fumi, but Sakura. Furthermore, judging from the length of the hair, the person Shinobu is drawing in the storyboard in the same frame is Sakura, not Fumi, isn't it? Perhaps Fumi saw this storyboard and realized it wasn't her, but Sakura. Moreover, Shinobu corrected the storyboard with the pen Sakura gave her, right in front of Fumi. (The director is drawing Sakura with the pen Sakura gave him...) At this moment, Fumi must have become certain that Shinobu's heart was directed not towards her, but towards Sakura, right?
11 hours ago

For the second part... no. He wants to make someone shine and the only one he made shine was slutkura thats why she popped up when he thought of making someone "shine". The whole process to make someone shine was with slutkura thats why the pen might be a symbol of inspiration for him...