GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 135 - Sex Scenes

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[Litreara]

@ComeEndTheKitty , some clown changed the tag from Mature to Erotica. Can you change it back?

 

[CraneBrane]

Lol don't harass her man but that's funny.

Nah at this point showing her the actual ratings isnt harassment. What shes doing is gaslighting and riling people up. Also disrespecting readers.

 

[diphuc1]

Nah at this point showing her the actual ratings isnt harassment. What shes doing is gaslighting and riling people up. Also disrespecting readers.

Long as they don't keep spamming the info or copy/pasta over and over I'd say once or twice is fine if one must vent in this way but it's not worth the effort in the long run to make it a campaign

 

[Orpheus7]

People were more upset because besides NTR it was promoted was a Comedy Romance.

She literraly made this write in the synopisis,cover and tags so is Airi's fault.

Also explained that it is a comedy romance if you read through the manga. It's more dark humor and it does hit the story beats of a RomCom it just subverted the story by adding the NTR/cheating element but I mean if you read the synopsis of the story and the first 3 chapters you should know what your getting into and/or at least realized it wasn't gonna be your rent a girlfriend RomCom.
Plus the publishers promoted as a RomCom not her herself.

 

[Stardink]

Given the clear attempt at narrative excuses airi was giving this chapter for all this BS, if she truly wanted to tell a story around the concept of dating in this kind of industry, than she could of done so, if she could actually write and was not a smelly gooner. A story like that can be engaging, can be messy and have drama, and could have characters you would not have to assassinate for your gooner NTR fetish. But regrettably airi is a gooner, so thats not possibly in her goon brain. however the final chapter ends, remember that airi is a gooner....and will goon

 

[Orpheus7]

What do you think Arir was trying to say there that Sakura was in fact just looking for an excuse to cheat on shinobu after all? By acting like she was unhappy and tricking fuckboi into sleeping with her?

Airi was trying to say our pure maiden FeMc was not in fact as pure as we thought she was. The signs were there from the last arc when she got "guidance" from her producer and nearly got double teamed. She kept thinking about that night too afterwards.

 

[BegoneThoth]

Given the clear attempt at narrative excuses airi was giving this chapter for all this BS, if she truly wanted to tell a story around the concept of dating in this kind of industry, than she could of done so, if she could actually write and was not a smelly gooner. A story like that can be engaging, can be messy and have drama, and could have characters you would not have to assassinate for your gooner NTR fetish. But regrettably airi is a gooner, so thats not possibly in her goon brain. however the final chapter ends, remember that airi is a gooner....and will goon

I wonder if that could have worked. You get the ntr-ness from the guy not really liking his girlfriend doing these scenes while not actually having to commit to the girlfriend being "stolen". You could even work in baits as necessary.

 

[iamsean]

Chapter 136 opens as sakura is getting pound towned by some actor, she looks over to shinobu having a mental crisis, rattle clicking the pen she gave him as he furiously writes out his 13 reasons why, for Fumi, who at this point is anger fucking some NPC co-star as she looks over to shinobu using that pen while he wipes beads of sweat with the handkerchief she gave him. Both girls, getting defiled as bro is making their hearts ba-dump one last time. Finally shinobu looks up, mentally broken and smiles with tears in his eyes... "this is truly... a gravures paradise..." roll credits Airi.

 

[Orpheus7]

Given the clear attempt at narrative excuses airi was giving this chapter for all this BS, if she truly wanted to tell a story around the concept of dating in this kind of industry, than she could of done so, if she could actually write and was not a smelly gooner. A story like that can be engaging, can be messy and have drama, and could have characters you would not have to assassinate for your gooner NTR fetish. But regrettably airi is a gooner, so thats not possibly in her goon brain. however the final chapter ends, remember that airi is a gooner....and will goon

Are you saying that it's possible to do a story about the dark side of the gravure industry and NOT have the main heroin not succumb to that industry? It's not character assassination if it was inevitable based on the story and the characters around her.

 

[hugorito420]

Also explained that it is a comedy romance if you read through the manga. It's more dark humor and it does it the story beats of a RomCom it just subverted the story by adding the NTR/cheating element but I mean if you read the synopsis of the story and the first 3 chapters you should now what your getting into and/or at least realized it wasn't gonna be your rent a girlfriend RomCom.
Plus the publishers promoted as a RomCom not her herself.

What dark humor?,it was just a stupid NTR humor that almost nobody found funny.The synopsis literally said NTR Comedy Romance,so we already now the NTR would come but she literally take so much time to that happen.(120+) that many tought that would be only NTR baits.

And you say that Airi has no fault about the publisher,everything that was promoted literally passed by her hands before that be allowed and probably the synopisis was Airi herself that created,had the idea of manga and allowed that to be tagged as a romcom.So yes she is in totally fault for that happen.

 

[diphuc1]

What dark humor?,it was just a stupid NTR humor that almost nobody found funny.The synopsis literally said NTR Comedy Romance,so we already now the NTR would come but she literally take so much time to that happen.(120+) that many tought that would be only NTR baits.

And you say that Airi has no fault about the publisher,everything that was promoted literally passed by her hands before that be allowed and probably the synopisis was Airi herself that created,had the idea of manga and allowed that to be tagged as a romcom.So yes she is in totally fault for that happen.

the rom-com is been relegated to the bonus chapters it would appear. I don't think it should world like this but hey it's there.

 

[hugorito420]

Lol don't harass her man but that's funny.

I think the harass will be big with her.I think i'm too soft to fell bad for her even if she deserves all the critisicm for the manga

 

[hugorito420]

the rom-com is been relegated to the bonus chapters it would appear. I don't think it should world like this but hey it's there.

Romcom was really bad here.

 

[diphuc1]

Romcom was really bad here.

I don't disagree, but it doesn't need to be good to qualify it being tagged as such LOL

 

[box2024]

Airi was trying to say our pure maiden FeMc was not in fact as pure as we thought she was. The signs were there from the last arc when she got "guidance" from her producer and nearly got double teamed. She kept thinking about that night too afterwards.

Well no shit she isn't pure neither is shionbu.

 

[CraneBrane]

Romcom was really bad here.

What romcom? No comedy in this outside of a sneeze while Sakura is talking shit, or dude getting hit by a truck after she sucks his d

 

[THeVaSH]

Airi was trying to say our pure maiden FeMc was not in fact as pure as we thought she was. The signs were there from the last arc when she got "guidance" from her producer and nearly got double teamed. She kept thinking about that night too afterwards.

right, Sakura was always a slut inside, she just needed to let it out xD

 

[Jhon1617]

Romcom was really bad here.

Since Chapter 128, we've had everything but a romantic comedy 😂

 

[hugorito420]

Since Chapter 128, we've had everything but a romantic comedy 😂

That is true.Airi just give a fuck you card to everybody.