GraPara! - Vol. 14 Ch. 135 - Sex Scenes

[Alsatia]

I don't think Airi would make such easy way to end this.Probably some drama gonna happen in the middle of the chapter.

Either way there's a lot to cover and I don't think everything will be answered. That or it's all rushed. That's if this is in the normal 20ish page mark. Maybe it could be 40 pages or so? But it's up in the air.

 

[Cross-21-]

I'm still expecting both relationships to end during a time skip, and about half of the ch will be ShiKura meeting and talking... With an open ending.

If we're lucky, maybe a vol 14 epilogue will give us the real ending... Wouldn't be the 1st time i see something like that (Soredemo will probably do the same thing).

 

[hugorito420]

Either way there's a lot to cover and I don't think everything will be answered. That or it's all rushed. That's if this is in the normal 20ish page mark. Maybe it could be 40 pages or so? But it's up in the air.

That is a sure thing.She wasn't able to solve it even if she had all the tools to do that.

She made a lot of mistakes during the whole story like:

1-Making a MC that is way more likable than a normal NTR(romcom) protagonist.And treated him in way that made people cheer for him and hate everyone that hurted him.And he being the only one who had a big development as the story passed.

2-Made a FMC that had almost zero development,only a off screen dvelopment with almost 1 chapter to end the story.

I know she is a FMC of a NTR(romcom) story and she would be too naive and stupid just like it is usually happens in this kind of stories but it was TOO MUCH:

2.1-She literally did threesome with director and Toppy to "develop her sexuality" and after that she did a "overwrtiting sex" just to solve the problem and free her rom her guilty

2.2-She let her coworkers badmouth Shinobu even if she knows everything he done to her and supported her to reach where she is now.

2.3-She didn't immediatly reject fuckboi after he confessed to her even if she had Shinobu a and let hit on her all this time


3-Airi didn't help her FMC being likable after NTR,it was pure opposite of that because she treated like Shinobu was the villian of this mess.With that she made her being more hated than anything.


4-She tried to make a concept that we knew it would never work because.How she could mix the two pure opposites(NTR and romcom) and try to make that work?

It didn't work and the NTR was hated even by the most degenerous fans of NTR and made the two most opposites fanbases reunite to hate on her and the manga.And she abandoned the romcom concept after 102 chapters and she started the mess that is right now.And now we have so many plot holes that she made that likely is not going to be solved like the misunderstanding thing.

This are only some few things that made this story to fail and Airi never tried to solve any of that.She doesn't let her pride go to make a fair story to the readers and didn't try to do a work to pontetially expand her public besides NTR and probably many of those readers won't touch her work again.

 

[kisanma]

That is a sure thing.She wasn't able to solve it even if she had all the tools to do that.

She made a lot of mistakes during the whole story like:

1-Making a MC that is way more likable than a normal NTR(romcom) protagonist.And treated him in way that made people cheer for him and hate everyone that hurted him.And he being the only one who had a big development as the story passed.

2-Made a FMC that had almost zero development,only a off screen dvelopment with almost 1 chapter to end the story.

I know she is a FMC of a NTR(romcom) story and she would be too naive and stupid just like it is usually happens in this kind of stories but it was TOO MUCH:

2.1-She literally did threesome with director and Toppy to "develop her sexuality" and after that she did a "overwrtiting sex" just to solve the problem and free her rom her guilty

2.2-She let her coworkers badmouth Shinobu even if she knows everything he done to her and supported her to reach where she is now.

2.3-She didn't immediatly reject fuckboi after he confessed to her even if she had Shinobu a and let hit on her all this time


3-Airi didn't help her FMC being likable after NTR,it was pure opposite of that because she treated like Shinobu was the villian of this mess.With that she made her being more hated than anything.


4-She tried to make a concept that we knew it would never work because.How she could mix the two pure opposites(NTR and romcom) and try to make that work?

It didn't work and the NTR was hated even by the most degenerous fans of NTR and made the two most opposites fanbases reunite to hate on her and the manga.And she abandoned the romcom concept after 102 chapters and she started the mess that is right now.And now we have so many plot holes that she made that likely is not going to be solved like the misunderstanding thing.

This are only some few things that made this story to fail and Airi never tried to solve any of that.She doesn't let her pride go to make a fair story to the readers and didn't try to do a work to pontetially expand her public besides NTR and probably many of those readers won't touch her work again.

I completely agree.
Although everything is still up in the air as we wait for the final episode, if Shinobu breaks up with Fumi, but Sakura doesn't break up with Yuma, it would be very sad and a huge slap in the face to the readers, proving that there are certain types of characters who are above good and evil—no matter what they do, they'll never have to answer for their actions.

 

[hugorito420]

I completely agree.
Although everything is still up in the air as we wait for the final episode, if Shinobu breaks up with Fumi, but Sakura doesn't break up with Yuma, it would be very sad and a huge slap in the face to the readers, proving that there are certain types of characters who are above good and evil—no matter what they do, they'll never have to answer for their actions.

I don't think that will happen.She would receive another hate for that

The set up looks like more of both of them breaking up.

 

[Alsatia]

That is a sure thing.She wasn't able to solve it even if she had all the tools to do that.

She made a lot of mistakes during the whole story like:

1-Making a MC that is way more likable than a normal NTR(romcom) protagonist.And treated him in way that made people cheer for him and hate everyone that hurted him.And he being the only one who had a big development as the story passed.

2-Made a FMC that had almost zero development,only a off screen dvelopment with almost 1 chapter to end the story.

I know she is a FMC of a NTR(romcom) story and she would be too naive and stupid just like it is usually happens in this kind of stories but it was TOO MUCH:

2.1-She literally did threesome with director and Toppy to "develop her sexuality" and after that she did a "overwrtiting sex" just to solve the problem and free her rom her guilty

2.2-She let her coworkers badmouth Shinobu even if she knows everything he done to her and supported her to reach where she is now.

2.3-She didn't immediatly reject fuckboi after he confessed to her even if she had Shinobu a and let hit on her all this time


3-Airi didn't help her FMC being likable after NTR,it was pure opposite of that because she treated like Shinobu was the villian of this mess.With that she made her being more hated than anything.


4-She tried to make a concept that we knew it would never work because.How she could mix the two pure opposites(NTR and romcom) and try to make that work?

It didn't work and the NTR was hated even by the most degenerous fans of NTR and made the two most opposites fanbases reunite to hate on her and the manga.And she abandoned the romcom concept after 102 chapters and she started the mess that is right now.And now we have so many plot holes that she made that likely is not going to be solved like the misunderstanding thing.

This are only some few things that made this story to fail and Airi never tried to solve any of that.She doesn't let her pride go to make a fair story to the readers and didn't try to do a work to pontetially expand her public besides NTR and probably many of those readers won't touch her work again.

I absolutely agree with you on all of this except for one thing.

2.1 She didn't do a threesome. Not even close. The director was a master manipulator in pointing out and taking advantage of Sakura's desire to take a main role along with her insecurities with Shinobu. She fell prey to manipulation.

And this was no threesome because for one, no sex occurred, and no not even a blow job, just two dick teases. And the moment she saw Toppy, she managed to snap out of it and realize the situation and thus, leave. Toppy was the hero in saving Sakura from that situation despite his intention in the act.

But I absolutely agree with you on everything else. It's saying something when 129 wasn't even seen as NTR by NTR fans. Even they called it cheating.

Who knows what strings Airi will pull in this finale chapter. For all we know this chapter could be the "penultimate" one with an epilogue being the true conclusion. We can only wait and see! The Fumi ending from this chapter really made it hard to speculate what can happen.

 

[box2024]

Well we are under 20 hours at the 19 and a half hours we have reached the teens.

 

[jonasadan]

I don't think that will happen.She would receive another hate for that

The set up looks like more of both of them breaking up.

I think it has already been proven that she doesn't care about the hate

 

[supportingcharacterx]

What if in the end topi is revealed to have written everything since 102 in one of his works and in reality nothing was able to separate our mc couple? as much as I am on team Fumi, that would be a way to kind of fix things for the audience? Or the classic “everything was a dream” lol I would love to see people’s reactions to that.

Of course im joking btw

 

[hugorito420]

I absolutely agree with you on all of this except for one thing.

2.1 She didn't do a threesome. Not even close. The director was a master manipulator in pointing out and taking advantage of Sakura's desire to take a main role along with her insecurities with Shinobu. She fell prey to manipulation.

And this was no threesome because for one, no sex occurred, and no not even a blow job, just two dick teases. And the moment she saw Toppy, she managed to snap out of it and realize the situation and thus, leave. Toppy was the hero in saving Sakura from that situation despite his intention in the act.

But I absolutely agree with you on everything else. It's saying something when 129 wasn't even seen as NTR by NTR fans. Even they called it cheating.

Who knows what strings Airi will pull in this finale chapter. For all we know this chapter could be the "penultimate" one with an epilogue being the true conclusion. We can only wait and see! The Fumi ending from this chapter really made it hard to speculate what can happen.

I put threesome but i agree with you that i exageterated.

i think what makes things worst is that Sakura likely won't have any consequence and is treated as a victim by Airi and she is making the real victim being treated as the villian.

To a NTR moment being hated even by the most degenerate NTR fan it has to mean something and send a mensage to her.

I agree with you that is to hard to predict what is going to happen in the last chapter because Airi can do anything.

 

[box2024]

I don't think that will happen.She would receive another hate for that

The set up looks like more of both of them breaking up.

We shall see soon however it ends I think it will be disappointing to some degree.

 

[hugorito420]

I think it has already been proven that she doesn't care about the hate

I think that too but i think the set up is to both of them break up with the respective pairs.

 

[hugorito420]

We shall see soon however it ends I think it will be disappointing to some degree.

I think it will a nothing burguer ending or a open ending tbh.

 

[Alsatia]

I put threesome but i agree with you that i exageterated.

i think what makes things worst is that Sakura likely won't have any consequence and is treated as a victim by Airi and she is making the real victim being treated as the villian.

To a NTR moment being hated even by the most degenerate NTR it has to mean something and send a mensage to her.

I agree with you tha is to hard to predict what is going to happen in the last chapter because Airo can do anything.

You're good! That was just my "defend Sakura (but not justify her actions) from exaggerated takes" instinct kicking it. 😂

Yea that will be the biggest let down. Even JP readers want that misunderstanding between Sakura and Shinobu resolved.

But at this point even if she learns the truth. Sakura will likely be hit hard but it won't be long enough for us to really savor the moment. Probably causing a time skip. But thats even IF they do this.

 

[box2024]

I think it will a nothing burguer ending or a open ending tbh.

At this point with how little is left to finish the story with 20 pages I don't think it matters I see some sort of ethire implied ending open ending or fumi ending fumi being the best option and bitter sweet grated if that happens Arir likes to parallel shionbu and sakura so sakura X fuckboi stays permanent.

 

[kisanma]

I think it will a nothing burguer ending or a open ending tbh.

Maybe Airi will surprise us
and tear it apart even more...

 

[hugorito420]

You're good! That was just my "defend Sakura (but not justify her actions) from exaggerated takes" instinct kicking it. 😂

Yea that will be the biggest let down. Even JP readers want that misunderstanding between Sakura and Shinobu resolved.

But at this point even if she learns the truth. Sakura will likely be hit hard but it won't be long enough for us to really savor the moment. Probably causing a time skip. But thats even IF they do this.

I understand you😅😅.She not solving the misunderstand is just bad writing right here and only makes the story end in a such low note.

 

[hugorito420]

Maybe Airi will surprise us
and tear it apart even more...

She loves to ragebait people,so why not?

 

[Alsatia]

I understand you😅😅.She not solving the misunderstand is just bad writing right here and only makes the story end in a such low note.

It's why at this point I just want an ending that "makes sense". Like I read it. Ponder a bit. Shrug and go "I guess I can see it ending that way".

 

[diphuc1]

I think the likely one is both breaking up the relations, because i don't see how Airi can make both couples work here.And i think it will be a open ending to make readers think what is going to happen next.

How do you feel about fucboi and Sakura staying in a toxic relationship where fucboi becomes cuckboi, does this karma work for you