The premise is pretty interesting but there's a shit ton of plot holes like the fact that she can just choose whether or not to be able to touch shit or not. And what the hell does cumming in her look like? Isn't she a ghost? Wouldn't it look like just a floating ball of cum in the air if you accidentally walked in? How tf did he even get his dick out in the train when it was jampacked? Not a bad story tho. Would say I enjoyed reading it but if you're looking for story just don't bother. Just read for the porn.