Haburare Zukai no Isekai Boukentan - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The Rune Pact.

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Art and translation is great, everything else is complete trash. It would’ve been mid at best if it wasn’t so disgustingly rushed, but even that’s being somewhat generous. A good manga adaptation from LN means that both new readers and LN readers would be catered to, yet I doubt even the LN readers would’ve been satisfied with the adaptation because of the pacing.
 
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To be fair the first chapters of an isekai can rightfully be skipped because it's just """"""groundwork"""""" that we've seen time and time again. Guy gets transferred to another world, gets some powers, but then betrayed by a trusted ally, then develops trust issues. Been there, done that, at least like, 5 times already.

But you either tell it all or skip them all. This one sort of tells half of the story then just does a poorly portrayed timeskip. Yeesh.
 
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I know one of the chief complaints about Isekai is it's always the same start up with the class getting teleported, long explanation from Royal and begging them to be heroes for their kingdom and then the training aspect. But this one might have jumped a bit too far and it's a bit too sparse on the build up.

It did have the flash back about her asking him for help, but it doesn't have much.

Also, the fight and subsequent explanation of the region they're in is also lacking.



It just feels like, "well you should've read the LN/WN for more information".

Also trying to be too edgy too fast.

I'm actually impressed an editor signed off on this.
 
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Kinda odd for betrayal plotlines to skip 80% of the betrayal right to the first step of revenge. We know he got stabbed, and apparently lies spread about him; usually there is some trust build up, and actually seeing him suffering from the betrayal destroying his life.
 
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Scene pacing is pretty horrible too. Probably will not continue with this one :pout:

Lmfao hold up, why is his comment in Spanish?? 💀💀💀 The original is in English and yet you're replying to the same exact comment but it's in Spanish



Bro what is this site?? Lmfao
After you post a comment there is a small window where you can edit the post and it won't mark it as edited, so could be that op changed it to English after the fact 🤷
 
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This feels Like someone cut random pages out of a volume to make a chapter. There's too much going on which has not been explained in the slightest.
 
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The next chapter is probably the flashback, which explains why the MC is cynical and vindictive toward the people around him.
 

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