Not the worst TL I've seen, but definitely need a TS. It's appreciated that someone took it on being fully aware of their skill limitations, and produced something readable. It's always disappointing when series fall by the wayside, for any reason, though some reasons are better than others.
I'll note that at least in this case, most are not overly derogatory of the effort, and the criticism is primarily constructive. As it's clearly not a snipe by any stretch of the imagination, I personally would seek to encourage someone with the motivation and time to develop their skills, as that leads to more content for all.
As ever, thank you for the time and effort.