Hajirau Kimi ga Mitainda - Ch. 72.2 - Become an Onahole, Touka

[Qwertt]

this was a chapter

 

[Anonymous0070]

I'm taking the easy bet of over 100 comments whinging and cringing.

 

[Lex79]

Well sensei's scene was hotter but at least there was no interruption. Touka is going to be even more fixated on him now, either at some point he'll reject her or something morecis bound to happen.

 

[wisemanro]

he got raped

No. he got BJ.

 

[Litreara]

Haha, Touka became an onahole! Haha, it’s hilarious how Shirasawa doesn’t wake up even with his dick in her mouth! Haha, rape is so erotic and funny!

The author has completely lost both his touch and any sense of boundaries.

I’m really curious about the Japanese public’s opinion on this chapter. @Litreara, I know you’re not reading this anymore, but could you possibly gather some comments on it?

Just this once, please don’t @ me about this crap again.

Just FYI: In the app, the chapters are released completely, meaning the comments refer to both 72.1 and 72.2. Here they are:

ひどすぎる神回

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An excessively awful godly chapter.

This sounds reasonable.

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過去1レベルでやばくて草

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It's the worst level ever, it's so crazy it's funny.

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くっそエロいんだがエロくねぇ!!

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It's really erotic, but it's not erotic at all!!

Indeed.

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咥えてる姉ちゃんエッ... 本上の乳首!!!!!! おっぱい!!!!!! ちくB!!!!!! パイオツ!!!!! ビーちく!!!!!

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The older sister with the mouthful... Honjou's nipples!!!!!! Boobs!!!!!! Nipple B!!!!!! Boobies!!!!! B-nip!!!!!

Gooner.

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姉ちゃんの短歌、股間和歌集に収録しなくちゃ!

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I have to include the older sister tanka in the 'Crotch Waka Anthology'!

Waka (和歌): This is a broad term that encompasses all forms of classical Japanese poetry, including tanka. Waka traditionally consists of 31 syllables in a 5-7-5-7-7 pattern.
Tanka (短歌): This is a specific type of waka that follows the same 5-7-5-7-7 syllable structure.

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シラサワ寝てる所を襲われるの2回目かw

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Is this the second time Shirasa is being attacked while sleeping? lol

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紳士の皆様 こんばんは
現在なら冬華さまの乳首が無修正なので、海苔が貼られる前に購入すべし!

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Good evening, gentlemen.
Right now, Touka's nipples are unedited, so you should buy them before the censorship is applied!

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嵐の女

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Tempestuous woman.

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流石に声出して笑ったww

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I couldn’t help but laugh out loud, lol.

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イカれてるよこの女

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This woman is crazy.

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えろいんだけどギャグより過ぎて笑ってしまうw
正直えろは初期の頃が一番えろかったな
最近のノリも嫌いではないが

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It's erotic, but it's so over-the-top with the gags that I end up laughing, lol.
Honestly, the eroticism was the strongest in the early days.
I don't dislike the recent vibe either, though.

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凄まじい勢い

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tremendous momentum.

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ノリが貼られる前にみんな買うんだ!
めっちゃ笑えるぞ!!

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Everyone, buy it before the censorship is applied!
It’s super funny!!

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最後の置き手紙 「今度お母様にもごあいさつ させてくださいね」か?
お姉ちゃん 賢者タイム 突入してて草

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Is that the last note saying, 'Please let me greet your mother next time'?
Big sis, you're entering 'sage time' and it’s hilarious.

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第一話見た後にこれ見たら落差で咽せる

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After reading the first chapter, if you read this, the difference will make you choke.

Indeed.

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田子の浦に
うち出いでて見れば
白妙の
富士の高嶺に
雪は降りつつ
山辺赤人

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When I step out to Tago no Ura,
I see the pure white snow
Falling on the high peak
Of Mount Fuji.

This is a famous waka poem that describes the serene image of snow falling on Mount Fuji.

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過去の歌人も最後の歌の改変には草葉の陰で泣いてるよww

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Even the poets of the past are crying in the shadows of the grass over the changes to the final poem, lol.

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えろいんだけどえろくない。
どこへ向かってるんだ。

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It's erotic, but it's not erotic.
Where is this going?

It seems to me that it's just going in circles.

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お母様にも挨拶する?
彼女気取りか??

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Are you going to greet his mother too?
Acting like you’re his girlfriend??

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いい朝だなー
って割には部屋の時計が1時半頃なんだが

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It's a nice morning,
However, the clock in the room says it's around 1:30.

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[uknety2003]

 

[BloodFalcon22]

Aight author-sama where do we go from here?

I get that we were supposed to be working on the "make a film with onee-san" plot but the detour into "onee-san guzzles his cum while he sleeps" was totally necessary. I'm sure this will have no negative effects on her brain rot whatsoever.

Now that little sis is in last place with sexual activity are we going to get another fanservice arc with her to catch up before bringing the plot back into play? Or are we going full-send into Onee-san getting to fuck him first for shits and giggles?

 

[hiridis]

idk

 

[RedNanaki]

Not going to lie but this is to good lol

 

[bishbosh_91]

https://imgur.com/a/TXIRfUK

 

[Ainkrip]

Honestly reverse the rolls here, college guy gets under the covers of a high school girl and eats her out in her sleep. The outrage would be insane and no one here would be okay with it. But when it happens to a guy its okay? It doesn’t need to be treated seriously? We haven’t even fully seen Shirasawa’s feelings with everything that happened with Edoka. If the author wants to write a mindless story, more power to her, but please don’t try to get serious. It’ll feel out of place

Men and women are different. We have different brains, values, behaviour, even morals. So there are no double standards here.

 

[KriegGuardsman]

I know this is rape, it's just that the way it happened is so overwhelmingly silly and insane my brain is incapable of wrapping around that

 

[vmamoru]

New level of NTR ??

He dreaming of little sister ...while older sister eating sea slug and drink fresh warm calpis from him


Also ...new level of

Saying thanx after eating the mushroom :v

 

[Grye]

Eventually, someone will tell him he's not a virgin anymore

 

[Musaho]

what is happening hahaha

 

[b-no]

Used to be full on erotic but now it’s silly full on erotic.

When will they shoot the film about the sisters?

 

[whosaint]

and I’m dropping this since its getting ridiculous

you're dropping this because it's getting ridiculous
I keep reading this because it's getting ridiculous

 

[Ares19373]

he got raped

He always got raped and the woman who do it always got away scot free. My man can't even spend time with his main heroine now. This is redicuolous, it's like a reverse NTR.

 

[Bakuryuu]

PEAK

Is all I can say

 

[Wachtail]

I still hate the fact that it's his second time being sexually assaulted.
Still hate the fact that Honjou still hasn't had her piece of the cake.
And I'm sure I'll hate how she'll be the fucking last to get a piece (either the sisters' mum, the director's assistant, hell even Shiki or a new random girl)...
But fuck me this over-the-top horniness and silliness is fucking amazing!
Also I love the sister now.
Thanks for the chapter!