Thanks for picking it up. But I have some suggestions. Please use honourifics instead of using Mr. or Mrs. Most people here already know what they are or just forgo the Mr. and Mrs. stuff altogether. Get a non-ESL proofreader, someone who's a native english speaker. Upscale the pages and reduce noise. use waifu2x (select all images in the folder). Or any other upscaler and noise reduction software. Please use different fonts
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/type/fonts.html. Here's guide. Also it's Raelza with an 'R' not 'L'. Keep it consistent with the anime, and previous TL. Thanks.