I read the second half before the first one, and after reading the beggining, the story kinda went downward as the author started to focus on how the trap tried to charm his childhood friend. I really enjoyed the beggining and how the trap and the guy acted but the trap stopped acting cute and began to act creepy to his childhood friend. (I don’t remember the names of the characters)
I’d give it a 7.4/10, good beggining bad development.