He could have switched out, or even just moved the contract, so she couldn't sign it, but then he wouldn't have seen her get naked. Guess he's one of those heroes that wants to unlock all the CG first.good job mc, you left her fall in distress first, so she feels grateful when you save her.
Thank you for your understanding..part chapters still a pain, still not the fault of TL tho.
If I recall right, part chapters are a thing because people pay per chapter to view them and company abused it, right?
He is trying to be stealthy, so he didn't want to intervene if he did absolutely have to. Plus she was being stupid, this was a harsh lesson, but she won't make the same mistake again. Save someone to early, and they won't realize the danger they were in. And he may have hoped she would realize what was wrong, as well as he didn't get to read it before she signed, till right after she signed he was suspicious but unsure, once she signed it was within seconds that they told her to strip. So not really like he waited long.He could have switched out, or even just moved the contract, so she couldn't sign it, but then he wouldn't have seen her get naked. Guess he's one of those heroes that wants to unlock all the CG first.
They told her told her to strip after they got that bracelet on her, that was not immediately after she signed, it was after they started extorting her for a million more burgs. That's a lot of time for him to stealthily help, just like how he made the contract disappear afterwards and raided the safe.He is trying to be stealthy, so he didn't want to intervene if he did absolutely have to. Plus she was being stupid, this was a harsh lesson, but she won't make the same mistake again. Save someone to early, and they won't realize the danger they were in. And he may have hoped she would realize what was wrong, as well as he didn't get to read it before she signed, till right after she signed he was suspicious but unsure, once she signed it was within seconds that they told her to strip. So not really like he waited long.
Within seconds is not instantaneous. Right away after she signed they would put the bracelet on her. Then tell her what it said. At that point he would know they were bad for sure, but she already has signed and the bracelet is on her, rushing to action makes no difference. At that point he is just waiting for a good time to go after the contract. So let them gloat, let them reveal info. It was once they told her to strip that he had to change plans and intervein right then, which means repositioning, and making a quick plan, probably less than 10-30 seconds after the strip command is when they attacked.They told her told her to strip after they got that bracelet on her, that was not immediately after she signed, it was after they started extorting her for a million more burgs. That's a lot of time for him to stealthily help, just like how he made the contract disappear afterwards and raided the safe.
Uh no, look again, they ask for an impossible amount of money from her, they explain the contract and start to surround her, tell her she needs to pay with her body, then bracelet goes on, tell her to stop resisting while they explain how she screwed up, talk about how much she's gonna be worth, and then they tell her to stop resisting and strip. Even with all that, he waited until she was down to her last article of clothing. If you're talking about waiting for an opportunity, the guy moves away from the contract before asking her to strip, and we've seen this mc take things while still invisible and intangible before.Within seconds is not instantaneous. Right away after she signed they would put the bracelet on her. Then tell her what it said. At that point he would know they were bad for sure, but she already has signed and the bracelet is on her, rushing to action makes no difference. At that point he is just waiting for a good time to go after the contract. So let them gloat, let them reveal info. It was once they told her to strip that he had to change plans and intervein right then, which means repositioning, and making a quick plan, probably less than 10-30 seconds after the strip command is when they attacked.
Your very clearly misunderstanding. I am saying he had no reason to rush in till she was told to strip. Once she signed no matter what he would have to get the contract. But if they tied her up and put her in a cell, he would save her there. If they put it in a safe he would take it out unseen, he doesn't want to show himself. Till she was told to strip he had no reason whatsoever to just rush in and show himself when he could handle it unseen, and get to listen longer for more info. The point that made him have to rush in there and their even if it meant showing himself was her stripping. And that he only waited a few seconds. You see to think she took her time stripping, she was being controlled, and with that little clothing she would be naked in under 5 seconds.Uh no, look again, they ask for an impossible amount of money from her, they explain the contract and start to surround her, tell her she needs to pay with her body, then bracelet goes on, tell her to stop resisting while they explain how she screwed up, talk about how much she's gonna be worth, and then they tell her to stop resisting and strip. Even with all that, he waited until she was down to her last article of clothing. If you're talking about waiting for an opportunity, the guy moves away from the contract before asking her to strip, and we've seen this mc take things while still invisible and intangible before.
Please do. It is okay to wait longer, so we can read it smoothly.I can release it as a full chapter if you all prefer that format, but you will have to wait a little longer for the full chapter.
Again this waste of space …manage-
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Thanks for your feedback. As mentioned in my previous post regarding the space issue, speech bubbles aren't always rectangular, and sometimes their size makes it difficult to fit the text neatly. I’ve been trying to keep the font size consistent within the space available, but there are instances where the text bubble is simply too small to avoid line-breaking spaces. While I do my best to manage this, it’s not always possible to prevent it entirely.Again this waste of space …
In written English the line-breaking space NEVER EVER goes in the next line no matter how often you keep seeing other SL insisting on doing it.