Is it really necessary to add all those -san / -dono and all at the end of the names? It's somewhat medieval fantasy in a different world, so all those -san / -dono is looking really out of place. Or why that elf girl in the last chapter behaves like a samurai who pledge allegiance to his master? Just why? You are making a whole new world for the sake of the story, you can be creative and fill it with some brand new interesting stuff. But instead, you are taking Japan from the Edo period and dress it into European Medieval wrappings.
aaaaaaaaaaaah, whatever. I'm just desperate in finding something new and interesting, but stumbling over and over again of those ctrl+c ctrl+v mangas. this is pain.
to the guys who like it - don't take it personally, and I hope you'll continue to have fun while reading stuff like that because seems like I can't anymore. Sadge