The typesetting, cleaning, and redrawing looks great imo.
Translation is good too, I understand the use of MTL and as long as you don't overly rely on it then it's a good tool to learn. Maybe someday you'll be fluent enough to greatly reduce its use or maybe not use it at all.
Would you be doing the chapters that are already here or would you be continuing where it left off?
I don't mind either way.
Good work, hope to seeing some more of your works soon!
edit: ok, I see some (probably) mistakes for the sfx but I know it's a pain to do so either clean, rd, and tl those are not at all
