I'm dropping this story, My reasons are...
1) The narrative is bad. (This happens, and THEN that happens, and this happens... and so on)
2) The MC is developed in a stupid way
- I'm okay with "I remember knowledge from another life"
- I'm not okay with THEN I CAN USE CHEMICAL KNOWLEDGE APPLIED WITH MAGIC
- I'm okay with, his abilities were seen as so bad that he's being thrown away
- I'm NOT okay with, he trained for six months, alone, under house arrest, and became OP
- I'll stop here
3) He's OP, but everything outside of his power is SO EASY that, to me, it's hurting the development of the story
- He can build a house, with a talent he discovered 6 months ago
- He can make things with sand, he's NEVER been shown to be able to
- He can locate things with the ground, just because
- He can make the ground go from BAD to GOOD, just because
4) When people try to show appreciation for your amazing works
- He doesn't seem to UNDERSTAND that his power is OP, even though he understands things from his previous world.
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Somo more notes a took when reading this:
He has good social skills;
He is super strong
Girls just like him right away
Girls just look good taking a shower with him, almost immediately
He can build a house, almost completely, in 1 day of work;