Heimin Shusshin no Teikoku Shoukan, Munou na Kizoku Joukan wo Juurin shite Nariagaru - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.2

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it keeps saying "her"
i feel like there's a mistranslation on the TL's part
 
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I apologize for the poor translation in the two sheets where it said 'Her smile,' which referred to a woman and not a man 😔. I have already corrected it, it slipped past both the new proofreader and me. Similarly, if anyone wishes to assist us with proofreading for the upcoming chapters, they can send a message to Discord. Thank you.
 
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I apologize for the poor translation in the two sheets where it said 'Her smile,' which referred to a woman and not a man 😔. I have already corrected it, it slipped past both the new proofreader and me. Similarly, if anyone wishes to assist us with proofreading for the upcoming chapters, they can send a message to Discord. Thank you.
Nice for the quick fix. The fix is still wrong though. You should have used "his" not "him."
 
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Really needs a proofreader.

Translation aside, story still moderately interesting so far. Story feels a bit grim, but art doesn't really reflect that, so I wonder if we're going to get a lighter tone moving forward and it was just the start that's grim. How many more girls is this man going to adopt/collect?
 
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Another apology 😔, I woke up the proofreader in charge to thoroughly review the chapter. The errors should be fixed now. Once again, I apologize, and likewise, anyone willing to join us to help with proofreading will be welcomed. Thank you very much.
 
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Let him who wants to forfeit the country's protection cast the first stone.
But seriously, with the garrison's condition like that, of course the soldiers couldn't work properly. They really need to do some reorganization.
 
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For those who are curious, this chapter is chapter 13 in the novel. But i will warn you, while not vastly different, the manga skipped a few things so it might feels weird when reading the novel.

It is better to start from the beginning again.
 
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First we meet a man literally named CHOMO, now we see a suspicious adoption inbound lol
 
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For those who are curious, this chapter is chapter 13 in the novel. But i will warn you, while not vastly different, the manga skipped a few things so it might feels weird when reading the novel.

It is better to start from the beginning again.
Just for curiosity... what did they skip?
 
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Just for curiosity... what did they skip?
not much really, just the detailed world building that will probably be shown in a form of flashback later in the manga. I mean, how else will you condense 13 chapter to only 2 chapter

Though i do say the character dynamic is kinda different too. If in the manga Emma is someone who goes with the flow since she is used to MC's antics, the novel Emma is someone who is constantly concerned with her friend who keeps making enemy with the nobility and can't get used to it (at least in the early chapters)
 
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Another apology 😔, I woke up the proofreader in charge to thoroughly review the chapter. The errors should be fixed now. Once again, I apologize, and likewise, anyone willing to join us to help with proofreading will be welcomed. Thank you very much.
appreciate the hard work, it can't be easy to double-translate, yet you are doing it so others can enjoy the story. I'm quite taken to this so far, so even if there are errors here and there, I really want to thank you and your team for the work they've done =03.
 

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