Henkyou Mob Kizoku no Uchi ni Totsuidekita Akuyaku Reijou ga, Mechakucha Dekiru Yoi Yome Nanda ga? - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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assassinations.

Not a spoiler, my take.

I read that assassin turned into a D-rank sexy girl....
It's a frontier region and they are next to an enemy nation. We also see in this chapter that they get very few supplies and are very much left in the cold even though they are the last line of the defence for nation
 
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I want to say to perhaps not just suddenly introduce a huge dragon out of nowhere. But then thought about it, and I can't see how you can break that news gently.
 
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It's a frontier region and they are next to an enemy nation. We also see in this chapter that they get very few supplies and are very much left in the cold even though they are the last line of the defence for nation
they're not last line. They're like first-middle line of defence. Thats what being a border city kinda is. It sounds like they get at least some supplies and resources to buy more supplies, but it's also a case of: they're the border and holding the current position rather than pushing back, and presumably the nation is willing to let it get invaded since it still has other cities between it and the capital or whatever the nation would want to protect, so it's not that hard to reason why they aren't super stocked in resources.

Remember that protag mentioned the region also being full of monsters, so the additional resources for that as well are probably why they don't fund it all that much, just the bare minimum to keep enemy nations at bay, but not something critical.
 
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this doesn't read like mtl, so it's good, but... could you use another font? may sound like im being stingy but the font you use is ... well you know
 
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novel is alright, after chapter 100 i started to take a break. all characters have a severe lack of depth, and their motivations are all purely 2 dimensional.
 
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It's a frontier region and they are next to an enemy nation. We also see in this chapter that they get very few supplies and are very much left in the cold even though they are the last line of the defence for nation
they're not last line. They're like first-middle line of defence. Thats what being a border city kinda is. It sounds like they get at least some supplies and resources to buy more supplies, but it's also a case of: they're the border and holding the current position rather than pushing back, and presumably the nation is willing to let it get invaded since it still has other cities between it and the capital or whatever the nation would want to protect, so it's not that hard to reason why they aren't super stocked in resources.

Remember that protag mentioned the region also being full of monsters, so the additional resources for that as well are probably why they don't fund it all that much, just the bare minimum to keep enemy nations at bay, but not something critical.
The capital where the story will get soon is protected by a magic barrier that repel and protect all invasion for 300 years. Most of the population is in it and the territory outside are more or less forgot by the nobles by now, thus the lack of resources despite the territory being frontier to an enemy nation.
 
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Thanks for the chapter! This is certainly interesting, and Alicia my beloved. :meguu:

Monster meat is one thing, but spider meat! 🤮 Hopefully Dragon-Sama has scared away the demon bugs, thank you for this chaper. :glee:
Well, let's think that spider is a land crab... :worry:
 
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I started to translate to learn the language so i also use chatgpt and others
but yea it could be better and it is going to get better
same with typesetting i am just trying around right now
as for getting others that's probably not gonna happen for me because i really like to work alone.
Perhaps because I favor more literal translations, I found nothing objectionable about this effort. Thanks to you, I've a new title to look forward to. I also really like your coloring work.
 
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In case somebody doesn't already know, trying to cut the bitterness of coffee using just sugar is like trying to put out a forest fire with a squirt gun.
You need to add milk, instead. (Actually, you need an entirely different beverage. Coffee is disgusting no matter what you do to it, but the milk at least renders it potable.)
I assert that a reasonable grade coffee with the right ratio of water for mode of preparation utterly lacks the trashy astringency that is a hallmark to so much "coffee". A good coffee needs no help (black). A bad one cannot be helped, in much the way you describe.
 
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I like it, they both feel adult enough, althought there must be something wrong with the translation in the latter part of this second chapter, it feels "off".
Wonder where the story will go, how fast the pacing will move, will it center around political power plays? Monster fighting?
 

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