Hiraheishi wa Kako wo Yumemiru

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Holy SHIT, Chapter 1 is unreadable. I hope they decide to make a V2 of it and whatever else is proofread like it because I'm not reading any more.
 
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New readers: Skip to page 27 in chapter 1- it's a proper, edited V2 translation.
 
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So few pages? =/ Really wish the chapters were longer, lol, after all that wait.
 
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Waaaaaaaaaaait....Did the other male of the party get all the glory for the victory?Not the MC?

That's.....unusual.They usually are just there,on the side,watching how the OP protagonist wins the battle and the girls.
 
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When a monthly manga is barely as long as a weekly manga...
 
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Finally, a sexy lady, the Loli to Oppai ratio was getting a little too off-balance here.
 
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Waaaaaaaaaaait....Did the other male of the party get all the glory for the victory?Not the MC?

That's.....unusual.They usually are just there,on the side,watching how the OP protagonist wins the battle and the girls.

Maybe MC wanted to stay low (Not getting attention to higher ups) we don't know yet.
 
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@Deathglass Writing 101: you need to make reader acquainted to charqacters before you star torturing and killing them.
 
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@kwendy GOT Logic.

Step 1: We'll introduce new characters, get people emotionally invested, and then kill them off.

Step 2: Repeat step 1 until those human-shaped wallets re-discover pattern recognition.

Step 3: Profit
 
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One thing that makes me not really like this series... There's no visible romance plot in this story...!! Every fantasy/isekai story wherr the mc have to fight his fate to the end to take back his/her freedom, fighting the evil being that dominate and creating fear on every corner of the world, NEEDS fcking romance plot even if its not harem (though harrm is the best for this kind of story)..!!!

Edit : Sorry, this story has harem but not really visible romance. I want romance if possible harem that created from romance.
 
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Eh, I like it better without romance. Or you do romance like OPM did shonen. You parody it to the point of incredulity, where it's more comedy than the applicable genre.
 
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@JustNatsuki Oh, I finally found a kindred spirit. Someone who gets how romance can potentially change things for the worse depending how it's applied.
Although instead of just a parody I believe romance can be fine here if it's only hinted at some point, shows some subtle signs of developemnt way in in the background, and only properly shows up in the epilogue. That's the best way I believe such a theme can be explored in a fantasy/ action/ adventure story like this one.

Romance will shift the tone on this story to either a more positive one and miss it's point, or make it darker with a possible bad ending event. Either way the series will probably lose something in the process. The majority of people will not mind that, but for people who want to read a more serious kind of story, it will change things a lot.
 

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