Hitori Camp shitara Isekai ni Teni shita Hanashi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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thanks, i don't think i could ever go camping unless it's 'glamping' but at least she's not alone in this isekai lol

lol talking mushrooms are wild i'm not fond of them myself but i half expected her to take a bite or ask to harvest some of their 'flesh' lol
 
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I wonder if the artist understands the first part of "show, don't tell" to mean "keep ever so slightly out of sight". Be it combat, monster corpses, cockroach spirits (these last ones in particular, had they not said several pages later what they were supposed to be, I'd have remained totally clueless).

And when they do show SOMETHING it doesn't make sense, like a goblin head cleanly cut off horizontally after a vertical slash. Was that goblin obediently bowing down, waiting for her to hit him?
 
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Those sudden scene shifts are a little disorienting, i gotta say.

"Oh no I cut my finger and one of those magic stones absorbed itself into the wound, what does that mean? Anyway I started practicing with the crossbow..."
Gotta speedrun as many chapters as possible before the ax shows up.
 
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Gotta speedrun as many chapters as possible before the ax shows up.
I think it's the opposite... I have two theories:
  1. The speedrun lowers the quality of the manga, that hampers sales, getting it axed faster...
  2. Maybe this manga was meant to be from the start as an LN advert, and the mangaka is restricted by either number of chapters, and/or number of manga volumes (page count).
 

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