Hitori Camp shitara Isekai ni Teni shita Hanashi - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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thanks, i don't think i could ever go camping unless it's 'glamping' but at least she's not alone in this isekai lol

lol talking mushrooms are wild i'm not fond of them myself but i half expected her to take a bite or ask to harvest some of their 'flesh' lol
 
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I wonder if the artist understands the first part of "show, don't tell" to mean "keep ever so slightly out of sight". Be it combat, monster corpses, cockroach spirits (these last ones in particular, had they not said several pages later what they were supposed to be, I'd have remained totally clueless).

And when they do show SOMETHING it doesn't make sense, like a goblin head cleanly cut off horizontally after a vertical slash. Was that goblin obediently bowing down, waiting for her to hit him?
 
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Is she calling that boar a car, or is saying it's the size of a car?
 
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the pacing is awful and disjointed, which sucks because I think there's an interesting story in here just a bad adaptation to comic format
 

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