Dex-chan lover
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OI, So I've begun working on a story focusing around and on one of my Favorite Characters I've made. Currently I'm 8 pages into Chapter 2, but I'm stumped on the minor topic of wordage.
"‘What can we do?’ Punurim wondered. ‘We cannot have exhausted every facet, have we?’"
Now I know "Wondered" is simplistic, but, that's not the point here. It's the latter portion of his dialogue. "We cannot have exhausted every facet, have we?" It sounds odd, right? Should it be "Can we?" I don't know! XD
"‘What can we do?’ Punurim wondered. ‘We cannot have exhausted every facet, have we?’"
Now I know "Wondered" is simplistic, but, that's not the point here. It's the latter portion of his dialogue. "We cannot have exhausted every facet, have we?" It sounds odd, right? Should it be "Can we?" I don't know! XD