Hokuo Kizoku to Moukinzuma no Yukiguni Karigurashi - Vol. 4 Ch. 37

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@koshwin Thank you for the updates! I only expected one chapter to be uploaded but we got 3! Bless you and the team 😘

May I suggest some changes to page 2? The word "over" was repeated multiple times so they sound a bit weird.
My suggestions:
Ritz: Today's work is finished (or completed )
Seig: The bountiful season has ended.

Thank you again.
 
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@Looonila205 Indeed I too thought it seemed a bit weird, edited it... thanks for the feedback.
 

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