I don't really care about the MC, he's just depressed about being in a fake reality show, there's no substance. Like if he had other problems or an extra reason for why he's doing what he's doing it could pass, but I don't have any connection.
MC basically angst for angst sake. Literally a woe is me attitude. If he wasn't good looking, he'd just be a chuunibyou calling himself Dark Flame Master.
The story feels badly constructed the art feels way too rough and the flow feels off This feels like a rough draft 'cause it's not good enough to be a series