Hortensia Saga - Ch. 1

[MangaDex]

 

[nachtness]

wow the pacing is as fast as drag race cars lol

 

[Elder_Thang]

What was that??

 

[fahrurx]

Too fast, i can't follow it

 

[Chizan]

Well, as I'm hooked on swords and sorcery, I'll follow this. But in terms of enjoyment value, where some let you enjoy the fragrant scent of Beef Wellington, this is more like cheap bowl of ramen served from a hole in the wall in the back alley situated somewhere in the more derelict parts of a city's neighborhoods... Is the novel as messy?

 

[Seihanda]

Title say ch.1 but feel like ch.10
Where is the character introduction?
Namebox is not proper character introduction

 

[Huapollon]

So... fire emblem knockoff? The entire story is giving a terrible deja vu... the restoration of a kingdom aside, it even comes with its own "tutorial old dude" that we'd sideline the moment we get real characters...

 

[Halo]

> Hortensia Saga: Ao no Kishidan is a Japanese free-to-play role-playing video game developed by Sega.
> Sega

This explains the pacing.

 

[alannondarklord]

I can't tell if the pacing or the translation is making this hard to follow. Maybe both?

 

[Kreydis]

We're saved.

Yells the soldier as he runs for his life, being shot in the back.

 

[vannalixia]

I... uhhhh... okay?

 

[Threee]

Heroes are disappointing. The enemy Roi was a bit interesting like he might be a good character later after some suffering😁

The names are awful prince Charlotte?! And who was Shion?!

 

[silversand]

Not looking for proofreaders but the English isn't good.

 

[Habutheri]

@halo That sounds legit.

 

[blipblopyourdead]

Pacing be reaching higher speeds that the speed of light cant even best it

 

[ParagonNight]

Wtf did I just read, sorry attempt to read. Wtf is going on