Houfuku Kanojo to Koukatsu Kareshi - Vol. 1 Ch. 21 - Ako and Yoshi

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This... definitly got axed. Wayy too many possibility on stories and we havent even got deep into the 2 new demons.

Its nice tho, thank you for translation
 
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Dang it's over :(( I kinda wished they went more in-depth with the characters and etc. but ehhh still a cute story. Thank you for the translations!
 
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They could have....added so much more stuff to the story. The ending felt so rushed XDDD They could have explained their last life's relationship more as well.... Weird how the ML could get over that past life so easily since in the past he was driven to the point where he had to kill himself and the devil. The ML's pov about everything would have been soooo interesting too... because our (dense) heroine is an unreliable narrator XD
 
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I'm gonna take a different angle and say I'm kinda glad they chose to end it. It's kind of a mercy kill -- it's much more preferable to end a story that's floundering and start a new and better one than it is waiting for a stillborn one to get better. Not that this was "bad", the premise was brilliant. But like others have said it both added too many characters and didn't do enough with any of them, including the two main ones. The art style also made it hard to tell some of them apart from one scene to another, they needed more distinct designs as well.

But yeah, it was a good premise and I actually liked the characters who were introduced. Only the execution/presentation was off, but that can be improved with practice. I look forward to the mangaka's future work. It was a wonderful experience reading.

Thanks so much for translating, Bowl of Laksa!
 
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That was so rushed, Why couldn't there be just a little bit more :(
 
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well the end was a little quick but the length of the series is good, i did not see this going that much further without becoming bad
Thank to the TL team and the author
 
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Imagine falling in love with someone who possible committed a bunch of war crimes in the previous life.

Tbh the long hair girl is the most realistic in the group I for one will not date the demon king who committed genocide just because he turned into a girl.
 
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Aww there could be so much more, this doesn't even feel like an ending. I thought it was another regular chapter until I read the end notes 😭
 

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