Looks good, but gosh the writing is shit
What do you mean, S-rank party gets annihilated by slimes twice in two chapters?
Why is everyone changing in the commune area?
That random-ass "I refuse to accept him!" was so out of the blue, like she just wanted to say that phrase and he happened to be there.
There's absolutely no way he never found a way to use his drawings magically with how utterly simple the mechanism is. It's like everyone in that world is made dumb on purpose and only find inertia for the plot.
Ah, by the way, it was added to MyAnimeList if you want to track progress there:
https://myanimelist.net/manga/189463