Howling Blaze: Souen no Kenshi to Fushi no Majo - Ch. 2 - Nekoyūkan

[greenpenbluepen]

can't wait for the spicy stuff

well, "spicy" stuff is only Kaoru taking bath i dont know about you guys but for me, it counts as spicy stuff

 

[raineight]

p8: 'against' is misspelled

3rd panel should be like "the Albion government uses" or "Albion governments use"

 

[Amogh24]

frrrr me too! i think i should make one? dont quite know how to tho

Best method i could think of was having a page with terms and meanings at the end of the chapter, like how some novels have a glossary.

 

[greenpenbluepen]

Best method i could think of was having a page with terms and meanings at the end of the chapter, like how some novels have a glossary.

that... would be too big. i wrote a dict.txt and already has 35 lines (in my native language, it will be more if i use proper English)...
to put them on one "glossary" i will need to increase the glossary image's height

 

[greenpenbluepen]

p8: 'against' is misspelled

3rd panel should be like "the Albion government uses" or "Albion governments use"

ah thank you for pointing out!!

 

[raineight]

that... would be too big. i wrote a dict.txt and already has 35 lines (in my native language, it will be more if i use proper English)...
to put them on one "glossary" i will need to increase the glossary image's height

You're allowed to use more than one page. I've seen chapters with like 3 pages of TL notes, when the TL had a lot to say.

 

[greenpenbluepen]

You're allowed to use more than one page. I've seen chapters with like 3 pages of TL notes, when the TL had a lot to say.

ah i see. i will just increase the height of the canvas tho

 

[greenpenbluepen]

Best method i could think of was having a page with terms and meanings at the end of the chapter, like how some novels have a glossary.

You're allowed to use more than one page. I've seen chapters with like 3 pages of TL notes, when the TL had a lot to say.

(tagged both of you because both of you are interested in glossary page)

okay, i have made a first draft for how the glossary should look.
can i send you glossary image along with its psd? its currently midnight here so i am going to sleep. i will check your replies after 8-9 hours.

thank you.

 

[Hyacyon]

the art is so lovely and the premise is pretty refreshing. looking forward to the next chapter!!!

 

[Pyras]

The art is so pretty.
Also, cat maid cafe ?? I'm in. I'm all in !

Thanks for the TL o7

 

[Krune]

thanks for the chapter, so since she's basically employing Kaoru at this point does that also mean that any escalation in their gals being palsing would count as an office romance?

 

[Amogh24]

(tagged both of you because both of you are interested in glossary page)

okay, i have made a first draft for how the glossary should look.
can i send you glossary image along with its psd? its currently midnight here so i am going to sleep. i will check your replies after 8-9 hours.

thank you.

Sorry, didn't check dex for a bit. I saw chapter 3 and it looks pretty nice. I cant think of any improvements

 

[greenpenbluepen]

Sorry, didn't check dex for a bit. I saw chapter 3 and it looks pretty nice. I cant think of any improvements

i see. thank you for feedback!

 

[MelonManic]

Ayyy already inviting her over?
We moving swiftly ay?

It always starts as partners, but then they become more... They become YURI

The harden solider into everyday job is a fantastic trope
Aw thought we'd get some maid action
First we get see some together action though so I ain't complaining

Have a nice day